|Reviews for Snap|
| love bite chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
AGGHH! I don't know how to feel about this. It's like that Jack London story when the guy is stranded in the snow and tries to make a fire several times, but is unable, then runs out of matches and just dies in the cold. Quick-I need to find something happy or I won't be able to sleep tonight.
As always, well written.
| PinayAko chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
This was so well-written! I especially loved the first chapter. Good job!
| latuacantante4him chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
Sob. Even though this was sadder than sad, it is very well written.
| LindyP chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
You write really well! I have to say though that this story is upsetting to me, only because i hate it when Bella dies in stories & Edward is miserable. I guess it's just too sad for me! But your writing is wonderful. I will check to see if you have any other stories out.
| latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
SNAPPED HER NECK? Oh no!
| Ms.HellFire-ffacnt chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
Whoa, that was seriously morbid. If this was your intending angle, you made me cry.
| alisa231 chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
"I was trying to do the right thing, though that never worked out for me."
Isn't that Edward's life story? He tries so hard and yet things still don't work out for him. (
I really enjoyed this piece Ruby. I would count it among your best works. Your EPOV is always wonderful. I think you're one of the few authors who always seems to do Edward's character justice. I love how clinical and detached you made his language -it only added to the story's appeal. I enjoyed the bit with Angela as well. Great job.
| geosgirl chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
Very heartbreaking...but beautiful.
Alice's line killed me - “Please,” Alice almost begged. “I know what you want. Please. She was going to be my friend too.”
| dijurido chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
This was so sad but really good, I didn't expect him to do that at the end of chapter one! Wonderful job!
| Alejandra111 chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
WOW! This was just ... WOW! LOVED IT! Sad, but great writing!
| flecour chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
I didnt think it was too morbid, you're doing a great job! ) Im assuming since its and E&B story that she is really a vampire...I guess Ill have to wait it out and find out! )
| marauder-fangirl chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
What a sad ending for Edward.. I won't lie, I kinda hoped the venom would override anything Edward did...
| Princesskitsune17 chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
Oh my god!
this is so good, please hurry up with the next chapter
| jantanamo chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
I really love the atmosphere you build with your writing. This is something that I really appreciate in Derailment and now with Snap as well. The tone speaks to me as much as what is actually happening.
And boy, what happened in this chapter was crazy! You've done a great job showing us the vampire side that is led by their instincts. I totally thought that kiss was leading to more, but did NOT expect the neck snap! My jaw fell and I think I caught a few flies with that ending.
Great start and I'm looking forward to more.
| SpecialK199 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Holy snapping duckshit!
I did NOT see Edward's decision coming, but by god I was on the edge of my seat reading this one. What a wonderful premise for a story - more please!
Oh, and it's wonderful to see you writing again darl, I'm a big fan of your work...