|Reviews for Snap|
| Fliberty chapter 2 . 4/12/2010
This is powerful stuff. So sad to think of him effectively killing her twice when we all know what they could have been to each other. Also knowing that Alice knew who she could have been to all of them.
I did wonder if we would get to see Bella become a vampire and see how their relationship would have progressed if he had changed her before getting to know her. That would be really interesting too.
| yanxxx chapter 2 . 4/7/2010
It was very well written and emotional. *sniffles*
| velvetbutterfly chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
Um...wow. It was a great piece of work, it was just very...Wow. I like that its totally different than most things written.
| Laura chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
The writing is great. Edward's pain was very evident but what about his desire and "love" for her? Like someone else said, I hated the ending. HOW are you going to "continue" this with Bella DEAD not TURNED? Sorry, but a happy ending is a must for me with Edward and Bella.
| SouthernLights chapter 2 . 3/3/2010
:'( i cried
| roon0 chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Good one short but you won't be surprised if I said I didn't like the ending.
| FanFicersAnonymous chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
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| BBSapphire24 chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
I smirked when Edward thought about Bella outrunning him.
you've done a great job with descriptions of Edward and his feelings, thoughts and such!
I really enjoyed your description of Edward deciding that she would be saved, that he wouldn't disappoint Carlisle and his family. It was fantastic!
wow. Edward scooping her up and taking her away…. *sigh*
OMFG! He's really doing it! :O
Rosalie's attitude is surprising, but I really like it.
YAY! They are changing her!
You've taken an interesting twist with Bella panicking about not living, and I really like it. I think it's more realistic.
WHAT? He snapped her neck after all of THAT? JFC! OMG!
After…. all of…. that… just… wow.
That was really great but, wow. I am still in shock. Wow.
Enjoyed it, curious what chapter 2 is like…
| IsleEsme1 chapter 2 . 2/12/2010
wow.. the ending was deep. that was awesome.
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| appleburple chapter 2 . 2/11/2010
Wow, very powerful. This is a great "what if" story.
I want to say I enjoyed it but it's so sad it's hard to say that. It's very well written and so very sad.
Especially when you know how things "really" happened it makes it all the more heart wrenching to know it will never be.
Wonderful job. I look forward to more.
| danger-skies chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
The morbidity wasn't disturbing at all - it was very well done.
I liked Alice's comment of "She was going to be my friend too", and the conversation between Angela and Edward was moving.
The end, though, with Edward talking to Bella still? Beautiful.
| danger-skies chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
That wasn't what I was expecting, and that's definitely a good thing! I love the use of 'mine' twice - firstly to show the blood lust, and then to show his protectiveness. And the end, with the snap? Brilliantly done.
| ForgetfulForever chapter 2 . 2/7/2010
I loved the morbid ending.
*scoffs* That is so typical Edward behavior. I don't mean to be insensitive but he really has to stop overreacting and yank that stick out of his butt.
RIP: Isabella Swan.
| LMCosme chapter 2 . 1/23/2010
I just wanted to let you know that I think you did a great job with this piece...Thanks for sharing it.