Great story! I love how you kept the suspense while moving the story and characters forward. Thank you for sharing!

Great story... I loved the many twists and turns. Thank you so much for sharing.

That connection was good... Who Jonze was looking for all the time was right under his nose. Lol And who Edward was looking for was his boss.

I knew Seth wasn't dead. That was no surprise.

I know Jasper said things aren't always what they seem but he's not looking too good right now... And who the hell is Edward's enemy? Could it be the very people he worked for? It remains to be seen...

They sound like they're royally fucked but I will take into account what Jasper said...

How would these men know so quickly where Bella was? There's a rat somewhere...

This just got even more interesting...

How will Bella react when she finds out Edward really is alive? Will Jonze want Bella dead because she knows too much? Will E & B be on the run from the very people E worked for?

Well damn...

Wow! I wonder how Bella felt when Alice said Edward is alive. Will he have to step in because she's investigating James? Will her life be on the line because of it? Why did Jacob suddenly come back in her life? Did Edward miss some important details by not reading everything in James' folder or not watching his life outside of where he lived? Did Edward get sloppy?

Thank you for a thrilling ride. I was so immersed in your story.

I just read the first chapter; I am spellbound.
This is goi g to be fun.

Great story. Loved it.

Amazing story!

Such a fantastic story! Plot and writing is amazing!