Reviews for Détruit
Ships in the dar chapter 20 . 6/11/2014
Honestly one of the best written fanfics out there :)
marsmallow10 chapter 20 . 5/31/2014
Kinda sad it's short. But I loved it nonetheless.
marsmallow10 chapter 13 . 5/31/2014
Surprise suprise
MiserysMama chapter 20 . 3/1/2014
This was very good. I was totally enthralled. You can definitely write a captivating story. Thank you so much for sharing your talent.
ForeverRobsessed chapter 20 . 1/25/2014
Great work! You had me hooked from start to finish. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
meelee729697 chapter 20 . 1/22/2014
U wrapped everything up so nicely.
I'm really gunna miss this story.

Great job! :)) Loved it.
meelee729697 chapter 19 . 1/22/2014
meelee729697 chapter 18 . 1/22/2014
This chapter was INtense.
Very well done, felt like I was watching a movie.
The interaction between Edward & Jonze... Inside Bella's head, as her memories would fade into what was going on in the moment, right there on the ground.
Jasper saving the day like I knew he would, & E making the right choice.
Questions answered.
The scene as E drove off, Jonze down & surrounded.
- Bravo.

..(i hope Seth gets his sister [or loved one, whoever Leah is to him] {besides Jacob's ex} back)..
meelee729697 chapter 17 . 1/21/2014

Effin Jonze...
- Aw, thanx Sethy.. :)

I still remember Alice's dream, & I think it's goin down soon..-
meelee729697 chapter 16 . 1/21/2014
Oh, u are sumthin else, woman.
U've got me cussin, fussin, on the edge of my seat, & completely stressed out!
- I LoVe iT !

Seth, that little sh*t f*ck.
- Our baby, E, strapped to the bed?

I'm dyin to know who "The Boss" is.- Obviously, I thought it was Jazzy for a few, 'specially when I thought back to what he was wearing last time him & E crossed paths.- He's (jaz) definately stuck between a rock & a hard place... I think.
I just think he was somehow forced to betray B&E, but SO thankful he isn't the mole..- deep down, I knew he couldn't be.

Ugh, effin Jared & Seth! - Seeeetthhhhhhhh. :/

Girl, I so can't wait to see what u have in store for me! ... Ahem, I mean, for us.
meelee729697 chapter 15 . 1/21/2014
Maybe Bella will see Aro again when she takes him out.

Ok... so I ThiNK that Jasper was Edward's enemy fr the very very beginning.- But he's not CoMpLeTeLy cold blooded or he's never have told E to take B far away & he wouldn't have said the words "I'm sorry."
- But I wonder w/ Edward... what happened to Jasper back then, behind those doors?

Man!, I can't wait to unravel it all.
meelee729697 chapter 14 . 1/21/2014
Sh*t !

How the heLL are they gunna get outta this one?!

& what the haLe, indeed, is up w/ Jasper?- I've been having weird feelings about him for a good while.- But I still wouldn't bet on anything.
- Agh, so confusing.

& I'd thought that the bad guys wanted Bella becuz she unknowingly had something of James G.'s, but I just dunno bout that either.

As I've said, u are very good.

Ok, now gotta see what the hell...-
meelee729697 chapter 13 . 1/20/2014
Uugghhh!, this is really frustrating, in case u didn't know!
;) ... in a good way.

:( Seth.
meelee729697 chapter 12 . 1/20/2014
Better & better..

... (plz don't let it be Jasper, plz , plz, plz)
But, no... couldn't be.

Now let's see what the heck happened while Bella was outside that room.-
meelee729697 chapter 11 . 1/20/2014
So many chapters left, so much can happen!
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