Reviews for Jail Time
Blood Russian chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Thanks for the many many laughs. ;D
ihrtryoma chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
hahahahahahahahaha "and then he started snoring" that's funny
potterlockedintheshire chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
That was really funny, espically the end! Great job!
infinite grey chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
Oh, this was an interesting fic! I loved it!

“Whatever.” Two-Bit yawned, laid down on his bunk, closed his eyes and fell asleep, or passed out, or died, or something

** This line totally wrapped the whole thing together. Well written!

gumdropj chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Heehee, that was funny. I know what my favorite line is... "Your mom, Two-Bit. I jumped your mom." I dunno, it's catchy! Poor Dallas Winston, having to spend the night with a drunk Two-Bit.

The end was great. ;)
mo lei tau chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
HAHAHAHAHA! HILARIOUS! XD loved it so much! Go Two bit!
writersblock242 chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
“Your mom, Two-Bit. I jumped your mom.” -Best. Line. Ever!

I was really waiting for Dallas to strangle Two-Bit. I bet he would too.
Dozer chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
That was great. Everyone's going to stay in jail for man slaughter as annoying as Two-Bit is.
samaryley chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
I can’t believe I never reviewed this. Bad beta; bad, bad beta.

First of all, I love how Dally doesn’t know or care why he’s in jail. Very amusing.

As for myself, well, me and Soda were doing cartwheels down the streets…you know, those handstands and stuff Darry taught the rest of us while you watched?

** I like how you tied this into canon. Nice.

There’s good whistling, bad whistling, and then there’s Two-Bit’s whistling.

** I have a feeling you could substitute any verb for “whistling” in this sentence, and it would still be true. Two-Bit does just seem to have his own way of doing things.

“Your mom, Two-Bit. I jumped your mom.”

**This wise-ass remark just makes me laugh every single time.

And yeah, your last line is classic.

That was a perfect one-shot for April Fool’s Good Fic Day.
TheNightimeSky chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Haha - how can someone hate ol' Two-Bit? Ah, silly Dallas: just give in to him, you really can't win ... it's probably because he's a wee bit insane (and drunk; that always helps). No sense making sense of insane people.

Good job - I liked it a lot.

Lime Green Lioness chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
LMAO that was some funny shit! "Your mom, Two-bit. I jumped your mom"
DEACTIVEDUSER chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Two-Bit!You annoying ass!LOL. Two-Bit sure did sound normal...or could tell which. ;D Great job on this!Hilarious!
White Lion 18 chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
happy good fic day! You always write good stuff!
daydreambeliever95 chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
This was great! I couldn't stop laughing.

It was incredibly well-written and Dal and Two-Bit were in character.

I applaud it!

Keep Writing!
ThatGreenElephant chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
"And then he started snoring."

Go Two-Bit! I agree with Extreme Writer, it was perfect for April Fools Day!
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