|Reviews for Hatchling Days Relived|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Love it! *rushs off to read next part*
| fan girl 666 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
ah the thought of mini Lex is adorable and this is so getting favourited cause it was a very cool oneshot leading to a story
| shadewatcher chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
heh too cute. _ all babies are adorable. no doubt a baby gargoyle would be too. sweet little ficlette.
| j.d.y chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
aw... how cute..
| rockevergod chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
I hate to admit it, but I wanted to hug baby Lex, comforting and giving him all the attention and intentions I got inside. Yet I will never let him go. A sweet and poignant entry. You wrote this chapter with finesse and masterful storytelling.
However there were minor spelling and grammar errors (you seem to be fond of semicolons).
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
| Little Soldier Mine chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Dude! You shud like seriously write sum more! i loved the story! It was so cute!
| Dragon77 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next to reading Hatchling Days Relived part 2: “The Trials of Babysitting”.!
| Asher Tye chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
A few grammar errors, a few spelling errors. You seem to jump back and forth between past and present tense verbs. I also noticed some somewhat OOC moments, though they were few and far between (Fox and Hudson seemed to be the biggest offenders).
However, the plot is good and the characters have been kept interesting. I don't think I've seen a story featuring an actual reversion of one of the characters to infanthood. Plenty depicting their childhoods in Scotland, but nothing showing off present day. Odd considering the reason you gave that this happened makes a lot of sense. But this should prove an entertaining story, especially once the mutates, or even the clones (Brentwood) get involved. XD Can't wait to see more, see ya next update.
| eyelovefantasy chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Aw, baby Lex is so CUTE! I wanna hug him!
It's a good plot, but you need to work on your grammar. Specifically, you need to the past tense and past tense only. In addition, you replaced "fair" with its homonym, "fare."
Also, isn't Brooklyn a little out of character?
Other than that, I like it!
| Cheetachan chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Please tell me that the next part will be up soon, baby Lex is so cute! Also, I've never wanted to smack Brooklyn as much as I do now...