|Reviews for Brother of mine your heart belongs to me|
| Pacifistic Brat chapter 18 . 2/21/2015
I love it! Please update soon!
| DokiDoki0725 chapter 16 . 10/26/2014
I love you even more for posting this lovely chapter and forbidden scene. Though, I go to say, at fist when Cody said he wanted to try something new, I thought he was going to ride him or something, but the blowjob came second or third in my mind. Maybe you could do that next time.
Good chapter! I wish there were more lemons and limes, mostly lemons, in the story.
Oh and your writing is getting better, just some miss placed words and punctuation, but other than that, you're pretty good and you're improving!
If you want, I could help out if you need help with anything in the story.
Update more smut and romance! Pleaaaasssseee!
| DokiDoki0725 chapter 11 . 10/26/2014
Thank you for finally bringing in the smutty scene. I love you _
| nazurath92 chapter 18 . 10/19/2014
First I would like to say that was amazing as always it's like surprising cause it's new to me and get better and better with every chapter
and for more ideas if you want any you could make something happen at the school trip or Barbara something...
ok this is harder than I thought but you have my support :)
| nazurath92 chapter 13 . 10/19/2014
Ok you did a fantastic job with this chapter I liked Barbara and Cody the most in this chapter I read it twice that how much I loved it :3
| nazurath92 chapter 12 . 10/19/2014
I'm not really liking David all that much just because of what he did to Cody but this is getting soo good people are slowly finding out the suspense is a killer :) but great job
| mary chapter 11 . 9/7/2014
i think iam okay with this about
zack and cody having sex with
each other i love this story about
this i liked it a lot is called
only look at me this way
| wolfy447 chapter 12 . 7/21/2014
You said we get to pick I'm behind a lil bit but it doesn't mean I don't get to vote
| Nicky P 18 chapter 18 . 5/21/2014
I love this story, I can't wait for more.
| RadarRick chapter 17 . 5/4/2014
Since this story was posted so long ago, perhaps no one will see this comment. But I started reading this story on 5/1/14 and (working thru the language barrier) enjoyed it thus far.
I wanted to add that I think most Americans - I can't speak for all English-speaking peoples - don't even have a good handle on a SECOND language, and our writer writes in a fourth!
Under the circumstances, he's earned my respect.
| teddy2190 chapter 18 . 1/28/2014
Hay so are you still going to finish this 1. It is really great no matter if there is a lot of screw UPS. I really like it and I hope the person that drop the bag was there mother cuz that would be a great part of the story if she finally found out and went a little crazy and then finally accepted them being together even tho is weird.
| Angel Williams chapter 18 . 11/13/2013
Keep going, don't stop! This story is so interesting and addicting! Love it.
| Junjoulove chapter 18 . 10/13/2013
I've been waiting ages for you to update this story.. Really.. I love this story, like, a lot. I just keep rereading it. So, please update like really really soon?! As in, maybe tomorrow?! Seriously I really want you to update THIS story SOON! Please, I'll love you forever! xxxxxxxx
| WildSyncVinez chapter 18 . 9/4/2013
I love this chap. you should totally write a story for this. I read this thing 7 times now
| The Heir Of Breath chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
This is so badly written with incorrect punctuation but whatev's