Reviews for Follow Through
locheree chapter 26 . 12/7/2014
I think Bella got off too easily. She should have had to deal with him not wanting to speak to her for a while, then he talk to her when he was ready. Edward was too vulnerable.
Guest chapter 44 . 9/30/2014
Very good story!
LAB1 chapter 44 . 7/4/2014
This was a really cute story! I really enjoyed it. Alice has the genetic to have fraternal twins, not Edward. Its carried along the maternal line. How I ended up with mine is still a mystery though! First set of twins in a couple hundred years.
jus2read chapter 44 . 6/2/2014
So cute and well-written!
I see you love the idea of a lingerie pillow fight as that was in your other story as well hahahah :p
xxx
Dearbhla86 chapter 3 . 5/26/2014
"Great! The fee is $5,000 for the day"

This phrase sounds like Alice is requesting this amount from Bella to take photos of her collection when Bella should be the one to get paid.

Even if you meant Alice will give Bella that amount to do a job for her she can't be the one to state the amount of the fee required. Bella should quote Alice a price who should consider it in relation to prices from other photographers (under normal circumstance when not trying to hook her brother up)
crazycats7 chapter 24 . 4/27/2014
Edward didn't look to innocent, really. Any normal girl would have thought the same thing.
Lafemmevegeta chapter 44 . 3/20/2014
What a beautiful story! I truly enjoyed their relationship in this story and how it progressed. Wonderful writing!
Lafemmevegeta chapter 14 . 3/16/2014
Real Love by Lakeside!
irishnlove2shop chapter 44 . 1/27/2014
Loved it! ;)
Ginabella59 chapter 3 . 1/9/2014
Good chapter***
Ginabella59 chapter 2 . 1/9/2014
Good chapter again
Ginabella59 chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Good first chapter
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 44 . 10/2/2013
Sigh I do love an HEA, thanks for posting. xx
scf66 chapter 44 . 9/27/2013
Awesome story, but I love all your writing so that's to be expected! Thank you!
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 29 . 9/26/2013
lol all he wants is to get off too! xx
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