Reviews for Let's Die Some More!
Cyeithen chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Man that was funny. Keep up the great work
StardustedSong chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Oh my Irk, I lol'ed. I LOVED Purple's sobbing about the many fic cliches and 'JV's text. Yes, Mary Sue- Er, Fanchar- We're crushing your dreams! XD
girfukker6669 chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
"There r 30 invaders an ur not one im crushin ur dreams lol



It's funny to imagine getting a text from "JV" saying lol. I'm guessing he was the same guy who said, "Just die already!" to Iggins. He also wanted Dib to die in one episode, and that was stopped too. It's too bad, Dib dying would have introduced a temporary new character. I wanted to see him.

Agian, great story! I read the first part to this and thought it was funny. You seem to be great at writing sarcastic Invader Zim fanfics! Maybe I'll be as great as you one day! (Yeah right.)
werd chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
you could make a sequel where facncher goes after Invader

maz from invader maz the worst rated fan fic! and throw in

some random invader kim! of something!
madhappy77 chapter 1 . 8/10/2010

although not as much as the first one...

still, funny! :P :D hahahaaaa
osweetie246 chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
was the dude who killed iggins Nny? and OMG THIS IS SO DEPRESSING!
Dibsthe1 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Sorry about such a late review!

Ah, humor is not only subjective, it is very sensitive to one's current mood. What's funny as hell as one writes the rough draft can already fail to amuse in the rewrite, and what is no more than mildly amusing at first can have one in stitches when one comes back and reads it later. (My own "Older Brother, Younger Sister" did the latter for me.)

I loved the deliberate overdose of angst in this. So many fics bloated to bursting with teen angst cliches are lying around this section that when it's done on purpose, it's funny.

I didn't appreciate the song at first, but now I see how it fits with the theme of an author piling on more sad to make the fic sadder, only to end up making it funny instead.

"Boo hoo! The poor little skunk!"
XxX-Curly-Wurly-XxX chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Ha,oh God,dis wuz funny! D

All of it! How everyone dies(aw...)poor Gir! :(

Oh,and The part wit da Tallest made me lol.

Poor Purple...They took the McRib off the menu! :D

This wuz hilarius keep it up! - lol
wolfgirl101 chapter 1 . 4/14/2009 me this is a little sad...pour Gir TT_TT
JoeMerl chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Hmm...I thought there were a few parts where the fourth-wall breaking "this is a parody!" messages went a bit to obviously, though I can't quite figure out why when the first story did the same thing. But really, I thought this was really funny, with random Purple, and Fanchar and all that. But you neglected to point out that GIR can't starve to death! And frankly, I'm glad Iggins didn't die on the show; the Nick censors were good at balancing JV's tendency towards horribleness, in my opinion. Great work!
jellymaster chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
What do you mean you don't think the humor in this is funny! I thought it was hilarious! I loved it!

The Jhonen references, Purple's random angst and the Mary Sue bashing were the parts I particularly loved the most! I really like how you have Purple jab at the fandom's idea of Miyuki being Irk's best leader too. Not that I hate the idea of Miyuki being an excellent leader, it's just becoming so cliche!

"There r 30 invaders an ur not one i'm crushin your dreams lol ~jv~" I really lol'd at that part! I think Jhonen would be very pleased with you if he saw this fanfic! I'm so very happy to know that you've started writing fanfics again!

I don't mean this in a rude way at all; but I really loved the ending part of this fanfic when Jhonen finally kills Iggins! XD GO JHONEN! For this, you deserve an ULTIMATE GIGANTOR COOKIE! -hauls it out of a gigantic truck and drags it over to you- Enjoy! And keep up the great work! w

~Sincerely, Jellymaster!