|Reviews for No more pain|
| era-romance chapter 13 . 10/3/2016
too few explanations -why was akihiko born full demon?
-why did kagome heal so quickly after birth?
-does kagome live a human life or will she age along the lines of sess?
*easiest explanation is that she is somehow becoming demonkin...recommend adding a line or two during the epilogue. btwyour grammar really needs fixing, find yourself a beta.
oh and Sangos father is really really dead at this pointought to change the 'giver of the bride' to kohaku.
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/19/2015
dont know if youll ever get this review but you do know labour generally lasts over 20hrs...
| A.brokenheart.might.never.heal chapter 13 . 12/25/2012
I wish it kept going Cruz. u. are good
| Yujiro101 chapter 13 . 3/23/2010
awesome! is my only opinion, great job!
| ginnie177 chapter 11 . 3/22/2010
Wow, this story has been very good. However, some tips of advice: Grammar. You still mess up choosing some words over others, like many other authors do. A common word would be through and threw. One, (threw) you throw something. Through, however, is something like, 'I went through a wall' or 'He was through with this.' Just small errors, but when they are cleaned up, it makes your work look beautiful. Another thing is to not worry about putting as much detail as you can. The more detail, the better. Notice how most Fanfics that have more than 1500 per chapter seem to have more reviews? They are more cleanly written, and catch (at least mine) attention.
Lastly, just curious, did you use the 'Miko Rage' idea from another book? It sounds the same as another book, Terry Goodkind's 'Wizard's First Rule', but with A miko instead of a Confessor. Just curious.
However, continue writing, and good job so far!
| SairSeir chapter 13 . 3/22/2010
that was a wonderful story! there were a few mistakes but i know that you will become a goo writer with practice, trials and errors. the more you write the stronger your words become.!
| CrescentMoon760 chapter 13 . 3/9/2010
aw! thats so cute! i loved it!
| neon chesire cat chapter 13 . 3/8/2010
THAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVER i loved how sesshomaru died it was very clever and i loved how he kept calling her mate IT WAS SUPER CUTE usually i dont like reading but wow this was awesome. i have no bad things to say about it, it was like wow and i used to be a inuyasha x kagome fan but now im a sesshomaru x kagome fan. oh i LOVED THE BIT WHERE KAGOME DIED AT THE START AMAZING how long did it take you to come up with that idea? u should be a writer lol you put me to shame lol im gutted but WOW AWESOME oh i also loved when kikyo died well to be honest I JUST FREAKIN LOVED THE WHOLE THING BRAVO
| Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf chapter 13 . 3/7/2010
Aww.. that was really sweet. _ Such a nice ending. *giggles* I loved in chapter 11 Inuyasha doing a Sesshomaru impersonation. _ That was amusing.
'grats on completing your story! Thanks for writing!
| kouga's older woman chapter 13 . 3/7/2010
I love a happy ending!
| Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf chapter 9 . 10/27/2009
Okies... somehow SO not surprised Naraku ran off after his goal while the fighters were battling his demons. *rolls eyes* You'd think... after all this time... Someone would have guessed he'd do that and not have sent Kagome off alone. With KAEDE for protection? *faceplants* Seriously... I have to wonder what they were thinking. But then... I'm often left wondering what characters are thinking when they do something.
I understand about college getting in the way of things. Hope you continue to write when able as I'd like to see the story complete but don't stress yourself. Studies come first, or it's not worth the money you're putting into it. Keep your priorities straight and we'll just have to hope you have time to spare to update here & there. _
Thanks for writing!
| Pcebabe chapter 10 . 10/25/2009
wow good story please update soon ) can't wait to read more
| kouga's older woman chapter 10 . 10/24/2009
| allora123 chapter 8 . 8/14/2009
when next chapter?
| Sessomarulover chapter 8 . 8/6/2009
come on ur killin me please update