Reviews for Broken
Star chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and


said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and


said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and


again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f...ace the...

... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said... You're not pretty

you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be

with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...

~~THE END~~ ...Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your

true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to

you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,

outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your

life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10

relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15

pages in 15 minutes, you're safe.


Emos gotta love
oeon khan chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
very nice stry its romantic aswell
yakuit chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
this is brillant - really interesting

Im surprised you dont havemore reviews i think its beacuse you only have one chapter - also maybe you should put it on the vampire section

and try also
MissBethany chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Oh my god. It's just so unbeliveable. It's very deep.