|Reviews for Broken|
| Star chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and
said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and
said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and
again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f...ace the...
... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said... You're not pretty
you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be
with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...
~~THE END~~ ...Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your
true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to
you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,
outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your
life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10
relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15
pages in 15 minutes, you're safe.
Emos gotta love
| oeon khan chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
very nice stry its romantic aswell
| yakuit chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
this is brillant - really interesting
Im surprised you dont havemore reviews i think its beacuse you only have one chapter - also maybe you should put it on the vampire section
and try also
| MissBethany chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Oh my god. It's just so unbeliveable. It's very deep.