Reviews for Treacle Tart for Desert
Celticbells12 chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
Very nicely done! I was hoping someone would write a little scene like this. Thanks for doing it so well.

-CelticbeLLs12
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Nice.
Luna Goddess of the Night chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
aw...a harry and sirius moment. you should do up more one-shots, lol

-luna
Lorna J chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
I particulary like this story as it makes harry seem more like an ordinary boy and less just like the boy who lived. Very good Eve! ps you have made me really want treacle tart lol
Josh Boulton chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
This is an interesting read. Obviously the first thing to note is that it fits perfectly into the back, and is written in a relatively Rowling-stlye way. You manage to capture Harry's emotions successfully, yet sometimes I feel it becomes a little repetitive, or the dialect a little shaky.

I appreciate this was merely a 50 word review, yet I don't wish to heavily critique what is an excellent first piece, I believe if you were to focus a little more on the personalities of a few more characters, and perhaps expand your vocabulary slightly, this would be mightily impressive :-)

~Josh
merodeadores4ever chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
really like it )