|Reviews for Ordinary|
| freyja0taku chapter 1 . 4/6
| Bookworm11114 chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Really really really really captivating
| Hiddensecret564 chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
The ending almost brought me to tears! It was so sweet and sad when Roxas had to leave Namine!
| Sho Eisel chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Awww, I can't beeive something so adorable exists! It was seriously perfectly fluffy and once again, you described Namine's emotions perfectly. I love it! And I loved it when Namine said : "He looks better in white, anyway." It was just adorable, instant favorite :)
| ChuckleBunny chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Oh wow. Utterly amazing. I love how you incorporated the storyline of the KH games into this story. The ending was so heartbreaking and good that I feel like I'm about to cry. Poor Namine... Wonderful love story. Please keep up the good work!
| suteki ne chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
OH MY TERRANORT .
This story was utterly AMAZING. And I'm not even a Roxas/Namine supporter... until now :)
You've written the story so perfectly- I love it so much~! Seriously; this is the cutest oneshot I've ever read!
You're such a talented writer :3
Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to add Roxas/Namine on my OTP list ;O
| truthlieslovestars chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
| Rainbow Nature chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
That was something I would like to read again and again... really I mean it, tough it lacks the progress I still consider it a truly nice story... keep it up
| OriginalCopy chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Awww! This was really cute. I loved how they became close and closer and it actually portrayed scene from the actual game that had been adapted to fit this story! Nice work! More like this? :)
| rayziedayzie chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
You... are the epitome of insanity.
The good kind.
This was such a perfect story, I LOVE writers who can capture a long, very detailed story in so few words; the exact, PERFECT words that touch your heart.
You're so inspiring.
I love you :D
| KeytoDestiny chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Oh! I love the ending! X3 I really wish they had Roxas and Namine give that little laugh in the original too. It's so adorable. XD
I laughed when Roxas said that a witch is an old hag with warts and a long nose. So blunt and innocent! Think Roxas has been in Halloween Town a little too much.
Smiled when Roxas said Namine was an angel. They really are a little hard to see sometimes, especially Namine. X3
"He was always an idiot." That line was all Axel.
Aha, thanks for writing this. It's a nice break for reading tons of tragedy/angst RokuNami fics. Thanks again! 8)
| Tetsui chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Yet another work of art.
| AAK13 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
AW Idiotiique! it's very romantic... *crying*
I love how roxas call namine an angel! AW! it's cute!
poor namine when roxas leaving her. And I can felt her feelings. It's hurt so much when the boy you love forgetting you... :(
I love the moment where roxas and namine reunited again. It's the best namixas moment in KH2 beside in white room moment
I don't know what to say, but every you write namixas story is always CUTE! I absolutely love it!
ps : sorry for my lateness (again) :b
| 2kaon chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Beautiful, it is.
| SerenitySoldier97 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
That was amazing. I'm not kidding you.
Words cannot even DESCRIBE how much I love this.
This was... wow. One of THE sweetest and saddest one-shots I have read so far on (and I've read a LOT of stories)
You gave the Roxas/Namine pairing a whole new justice, seriously.
It was just so romantic and just absolutely adorable, that if I ever died after reading this fic, I would die of HAPPINESS X3
Now if only THIS was part of the Canon I would definitely be happy... xD
Anyways yeah, this was just wonderful :3 Thank you so much for making this :]