Reviews for The Colonel's Decision
rutger5000 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
I really love that last joke. Brilliant.
Hawki chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Although not truely a problem per se, there was perhaps a degree of segmentation in that the first part of the oneshot is dependent on narrative and the second half is dependent on dialogue rather than a more spread out mix. However, the story flowed well and was readable for the most part. Using Kahlee was an interesting choice, especially given her scientific background, but she seemed to give a distinct air of authority while at the Ascension Project. Having that authority stripped at the end was niffy.

Anyway, good job overall.
Coterminous chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
I wonder . . . will there be more chapters?

Adventures of Kahlee Sanders in OMGWTF speed. Epic beyond proportion.

Anyway, it was very hilarious to read, and the build-up to the punchline was great.

Of course, more characterization (and well, characters) will make my day, if you are considering to make a sequel.
Dragonfly257 chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Nice. Bit of overkill, though, wasn't it: "A very serious and non-humorous fanfic which dramatically expands the character of Kahlee Sanders, from the Mass Effect novels." Might have given a little away with that :D
Anne Onymous chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Delightfully serious.
sinvraal chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Geth 1: What the hell was that?

Geth 2: They've gone to PLAID!

Lordy, I've seen that movie *way* too many times.
Anonymous Ocelot chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
*snorts coffee*

You had me going right up till the Major called for "OMGWTF Speed." (Is that faster or slower than Ludicrous Speed?) Nicely done.
R-I-C-A-R-D chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
The ending was a nice funny surprise 'OMGWTF speed' indeed.
Knightfall1138 chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
LOL! OMG, I did not see that coming. A very tense and detailed story right up until the punchline. Nicely done!