|Reviews for Here & Now: An Update on Will|
| QueenHufflepuffTheKind chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
I always knew Carrie wasn't right for Will and that one day he would open his eyes and REALLY see Lucy. Congratulations on making me cry!
| Sophie chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
It's really good! I always imagined him with Carrie, but now she's left him...:( Couple of typos, but that can be easily fixed. Layout is quite good.
This story isn't unrealistic, but it does clash a bit with the characters in the original book. I think that it was really sweet of how Will and Lucy got married, except Will is about 16/17/18 in this story, and Lucy minimum 12 and maximum 14, so either age is a bit unrealistic.
Also the ending is slightly unclear, does he die or is he just asleep?
| scrivensabre chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
Warm and beautiful. A lovely continuation to the story :')
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
that is just perfect
| Psychedelica chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Okay, I'm going to sound like a total div here, but what's illegal?
Maybe it's because I'm English. Maybe it's not illegal here, whatever it might be. I'm just really curious now!
| Katamabob chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Very well written, beautiful story. Sweet. I found it a little strange, Will's sudden transition between affection for Carrie to affection towards Lucy. It just seemed a little quick.
One or two typos throughout story, but otherwise very well written.
I loved it.
| 95.cbell chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
this is really good! definatly considering you only had a week to do it! will you continue this ?
| Zoe Nightshade chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Isn't Zach dead?
| Agena K chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Wow! this is a great story! but one suggestion make the transition from the flashback to the present more pronounced I as very confused. I thought you had put Willie instead of Tom in the first part by mistake.I'm adding this to my favorite stories because this is one of my favorite books
| smallrose chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
This was pretty good. You should write some more Good Night Mr. Tom fics.