Reviews for The Third Hero
Raisin' Flames chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Sorry for the long wait, guys. Had way too much on my hand. :-P

No worries, though, I'm working on the second chapter, and hopefully it turns out finished and ready to be published by the time I'm done with it.
darkwolf227 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
huh! what is it! no you cant just stop! . . . !
LeiaOrganicSolo chapter 1 . 5/18/2009


anyway, luv how u incorporating that precurser thingy. please write another chapter before i explode... please?
Hugo Nakamura chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
A rather sadonically and and explosively humuruous beginning to your story. I even like how you provided a nice little "surprise" to start us off. Hopefully it'll be very good too.
MySupernaturalRomance chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Wow that was a great prologue!

That cliffy is leaving me hanging!

I'm dieing to read the next chapter! Update soon!

I always wondered who Jak's mother was in the games.

Defiantely update SOON!
The Beckster chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
It looks really interesting. Deff keep writing. and the one thing i noticed is that you're missing a word in this sentence "resulting in a strong _ which everyone ducked from."

Strong explosion? probably, just thought I'd point that out to you. It's easily fixed though. Good job on the prologue. I look forward to the first real chapter