|Reviews for Invisible Feathers|
| Realms of Destiny chapter 9 . 4/25/2011
I read this fic twice because it's so awesome! Anti Squall X Rinoa FTW! I like this sensitive approach though for an anti-couple fic. :)
I just had to comment this time round coz i even had a dream about your fic- as weird as it sounds!
It's so poignant and so emotionally captivating. The characters are well laid out, it's amazing. :D
| Undeniable Mystique chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
oooh that was chilling! Made me relive the ending, which itself was rather creepy. *remembers faceless Squall and shudders*
Anyway, I shall read on!
| trevor19 chapter 9 . 10/13/2010
What an incredible story. A sad ending, but conveyed beautifully. Excellent work.
| Becca chapter 9 . 2/16/2010
This story was far too short for me! I wanted to keep reading. I thought it was an interesting twist on the ending to the game, like what else would've happened afterwards.
A job well done. :)
| MonMonCandie chapter 9 . 1/25/2010
This was an interesting story indeed! :)
I believe this is my first tragedy story that I've read for FFVI, so I'm very pleased I read this one! I'll admit, I wasn't expecting the kiss between Selene and Ellone, but what can you do? XD LOL
Great job with the story! I hope you don't stop writing!
| strifehart chapter 9 . 1/19/2010
Well, I won't try and sugar coat it, it WAS a very dissatisfying ending. But sometimes, that's just how it goes. Normally I'd write a few paragraphs about your characterization, use of voice, punctuation, spelling, the story in general, random little things I liked or didn't like, etc... but really, all I can spit out about this is that it was probably my favourite FFVI fanfic I've ever read. I've scoured this site a hundred times over, reading half of the 8 fics, ignoring the rest because the first chapter showed how terrible the rest would be. While this one had the most unfulfilled ending... the whole thing was just...perfect?
Either way, I'm not sure how to explain it, but congratulations, truly a work of art. (As for the girl on girl, it was done very tastefully so no harm no foul)
| MonMonCandie chapter 8 . 12/25/2009
That is so tough! Again, I feel for Squall! This is really depressing (in a good way since it's angst).
Hmm, I wonder what you will do for the next chapter? I hope you update soon!
| MonMonCandie chapter 7 . 12/25/2009
I was screaming "no" the whole time! It's getting so intense now! XD
| MonMonCandie chapter 6 . 12/25/2009
A SquallxEllone relationship in this timeline, hmm? Wow. I haven't seen something like that in a while. Haha. Still, I want some SquallxRinoa! XD Great twist BTW. Wasn't expecting that turn of events with Ellone...and I thought she was just trying to be really sisterly. ...So much for that thought! LOL
| MonMonCandie chapter 5 . 12/25/2009
OMG! The Caraways had a boy instead! That is so unexpected!
I was thinking maybe Julia lived, but they decided on not having kids! LOL What a surprise! XD
| MonMonCandie chapter 4 . 12/25/2009
Wow! I could never imagine Ellone a fighter! You really gave her some backbone in this story! Haha! Great job!
| MonMonCandie chapter 3 . 12/25/2009
Aww, I feel so bad for Squall! No one is believing him! :( But I'm also curious about his "other past." I mean a music band? That is really unlike Squall! LOL
| MonMonCandie chapter 2 . 12/25/2009
Hmm, so we get a history recap in this chapter! Interesting turn of events! :3
I wonder what happens next to Squall?
| MonMonCandie chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
Hi! I just stumbled upon this story, but I'm already liking it! :)
I hope you can update this story! It really looks like one of the ones I'd like to read more than once!
Great job and good luck!
| The Polyethylene Man chapter 8 . 12/19/2009
Great chapter. Hope you update soon.