Reviews for Akemi
StandUpEvenIfYouStandAlone chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
i had to read this twice before i got it, but i loved it all the same
White Night Dragon chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
It's a good story, and Hinata is amazing, especially when she decides to "leapt on her crush" :). Next time, please add more about what happened after the first kiss (and before Hinata had to leave), and it will be perfect!
shyclueless chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Lovely, lovely.

It was a beautiful, fluffy little thing.

And the split personality thing was good.


PS: What does Akemi means?
lovestricken chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
That was really cute! It was also wonderfully written. :)
mitsuchan325 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
its cute.
90s Dad chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
This is pretty good. Its like the movie Fight Club.
Scarabeye3000 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
IT was good... bit short though.

Also, I thought the Branch family of the Hyuuga has the Cage Bird Seal?

Just want to clarify that

Best wishes
Gravity The Wizard chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Great One-shot!
dumdeedum chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Very cute! Hinata gets her man!

The split/dual personality confrontation outside Naruto's window was a little confusing, but I loved the final resolution. And Naruto with glasses (mean Kyuubi joke) is an original concept!
Bunny Sakuno chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
well done :)
elias chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Nice story!
King Hawke chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Hinata with a split personality! That's definitely different than usual. I enjoyed it abit! nice oneshot. I hope it breaks your writer's block.