Reviews for The Inner Eye of Harry Potter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My brain hurts, in a fucked way. Good? XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shit… who knee Seer Harry would have such a good love life… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit… harry lost his virginity..? With lavander..? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a pretty funny story. The sense of humour is strong in this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I A giant *rooster*? Unexpected, to say the least |
![]() ![]() It is very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the idea that the parts of the castle are reproducing to form new rooms and such in the overall building. I'm kind of wondering if this could be done in a game I code for now. It would really screw with players heads. I can't tell if this story was actually finished or not. Based on how this chapter ends, it doesn't feel complete, but I suppose it technically could be called complete at this point... Maybe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit, I''m unfamiliar with the word "inquest". I know the word "inquiry", but had never come across the other until reading this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry kept seeing earthquakes, so he should be in a doorway or a tub. Stayed in the doorway, and that made him perfectly positioned to stop Peter. I seriously love the logic chains involved in this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahahaaa! Oh man, this is amazing. Funny as all hell, but actually manages to cover the important plot points as well. I'm highly disappointed that I didn't read it sooner. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I've seen this story listed in your profile several times, but each time I dismissed it. I'm not a big fan of Sibyll Trelawney, and have yet to see her done well in a fanfic either. But this, was really well done. I shouldn't have doubted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you finish these remaining two chapters :( |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am wondering who will be taking over Defense in the next year. I am hoping that it will not be Snape as he is useless at teaching - i.e. he should have never been given a teaching position at Hogwarts. Perhaps Snape could have an accident during the holidays and die, Lupin could return and teach as well as Slughorn for Potions. I can't wait for said chapter, so could you please bring it out of Hiatus. Thank you in advance. -Mark |