Reviews for The Inner Eye of Harry Potter
jadethetroll chapter 5 . 10/21
nice work, stayed up an extra hour for this.
SaiyaCat chapter 5 . 9/1
pinks99 chapter 4 . 8/13
pinks99 chapter 3 . 8/13
Great chapter! Won't thing of slugs the same way again.
pinks99 chapter 2 . 8/13
Thanks for the great story!
pinks99 chapter 1 . 8/13
Great start to your story!
Regis chapter 5 . 7/8
So happy for Harry. Going through the mess with Padma obviously hurt, but one more piece down and only two to go. Plus Luna.
Regis chapter 4 . 7/8
Your brain is twisted in such interesting ways, and you can write!
Regis chapter 3 . 7/8
Hysterical. And being a Snape continues to be the worst.
Regis chapter 1 . 7/8
Delightful as long as one isn't a Snape or a Malfoy.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/19
Well written and hilarious. Tweedle-dee and tweedle delight was great. Just fyi, most women have one more sensitive breast.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/19
This is awesome. I liked the giant chicken. Was the Mermaids Intercontinental Liberation Front meant to spell 'MILF'? And be attacked by the Giant Squid? There's a porn joke in there somewhere. I've read Bungle and its sequel. Now for some constructive criticism, and I hope you take this as meant. One thing that bothers me consistently about your writing is your cavalier attitude to sex crime. I saw it here with Sinistra and in your others with Mrs Malfoy and other women, notably Hermione. I get that HJP is supposed to be a sexist in that. Sex crime is a wealth of horror, and your writing doesn't treat it that way. You risk alienating half your audience on this issue. For a male writer who nails it, Girl with The Dragon Tattoo is the best. Honestly, it seems like a cheap gag to you. Consider writing it the way you write other horrors - with humour if, you must, but with recognition of the magnitude of what you're joking about. Consider it this way - I've smashed my arm and foot beyond recognition and am a survivor - guess which was less painful? I'm an artist and musician - rebuilding my dominant hand and foot was easier than surviving rape. Please take that under advisement. I have no desire to preach to you, its all a matter of perspective.
Manatheron chapter 5 . 3/9
Hey JBern!

I apologise up front, but I'm going to be needy for a moment, did you ever finish the last two chapters of this one? Or the next chapter of Kobol?

OK, it's out of my system. How goes the next book? Are they enough of a stable income to call a full time job? Or are they still side projects that a just fun to do? How goes life and the family?

Best Regards,
SmexyBananas chapter 5 . 3/4
Aww that was so cute
1066wthec chapter 5 . 2/26
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