|Reviews for The Eldest Sister|
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/10
this chapter is fucked in the head i would not have helped the vampire rei i would have cheered on the dragon with popcorn and drink shouting for the dragon to win because i really dont like rei the ghoul vampire yuo just dont date crazy end of story.
| Ito Uchiha chapter 19 . 11/21/2015
Good luck with new chapters
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 4 . 11/21/2015
Naruto is pathetic. How easily manipulated. Pinky Moka is weak. Anything can easily subjugate her anyway.
| KiiroNoKitsune chapter 20 . 5/11/2015
Soo is this abandoned?
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
You spelt Chakra wrong. Nobody's going to read your fic if there's a mistake in the description.
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/9/2014
Naruto can go to the fucking moon and back easily and he needs all this help to fight! Your story sir is what we call in Russia BULLSHIT!
| Undeadgamerfromhell chapter 20 . 3/28/2014
Would u pls update this one
| King ofheros chapter 20 . 2/22/2013
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/3/2013
please write another chapter
| hostage chapter 10 . 2/24/2012
Long live stockholm syndrome
| pensuka chapter 19 . 8/5/2011
| Awsomeness7 chapter 15 . 4/20/2011
huh? ur changing the mist kages? but mei was so awesome!
| Awsomeness7 chapter 14 . 4/20/2011
OMG another shikamaru!
| Narfan chapter 16 . 11/22/2010
| whocares chapter 20 . 10/30/2010
Dude will you continue already man its been like 9 months and im still waiting man or put it up for adoption then