Reviews for Help Wanted
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 44 . 3/14
Hello, where is the honesty of Angela being involved and Bella just gave a speech about dealing with certain aspects of her feelings to herself. That article, affects Edward on a much deeper level than Bella, but she hid it from him and made him look foolish in front of Tanya,oh, and he will be answering to it in hundreds of interviews, not her. So, they both hid things about the others career. But, Bella always comes across as the victim or the person standing on a moral high ground. My point is that in both situations, Edward looks like the bad guy and they are equally in the wrong.
lilmstran chapter 61 . 3/14
loved it
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 35 . 3/13
So, why didn't bella insist on paying him a standard hotel fee? She's so all over the map, like she excepts clothing and gifts from Alice, her BFF is using Alice as a free wedding consultant, she eats out with them but now she insists on paying a gym membership? So, shouldn't she feel like she is now screwing her boss and landlord? Also, was she planning on living with Angela till Angela was ready. I guess, and don't get me wrong, I like bella, but the martyr thing needs to go. Maybe because I know what happens with rose, I am being more judgemental this time around because I don't think her actions are forgivable in the sense that they could remain friends or that she would be welcomed back in the circle, no questions asked. Emmett would have to learn some balance but regardless of the blackmail, she couldn't have touched E&B without roses help and she put herself above her friends and the supposed love of her life and it bugs me how easily she is forgiven, and that Emmett and bella defend her actions.
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 32 . 3/12
So, after much deliberation, I have decided that Emmett either has the most lax job in the world or is the shittiest bodyguard on planet earth. First, the rap party, but I can give him a pass there since E&B weren't together but, he promised to look after Bella,and then left her and Rose alone in a spot where they couldn't be seen? And, what's the deal with Lake Como and Emmett too? Rose has a job, most people can't take 2 weeks, or anytime for that matter on no notice. Especially considering that Tanya just gave her time off. I would just think, having such an awful boss, that there would be way more obstacles. I think that would be a good story twist in this tale if her job was interfering with their relationship, you know Rose having to cancel all the time, getting called away, and it making Emmett question her commitment to him. Just seems prior to E&B becoming a couple, Bella definitely did not have set hours and Edward was not all that demanding.
LesleyLunaCullen chapter 28 . 3/12
Emmett is a immature idiot. I know he's Edwards cousin but the only person he has said good things about is Rose and that is generally overtly sexual. Idk, just seems super immature, oh, and yes Tanya is a bitch but I don't think she is for making rose go to NYC over London, that's Roses job, she's going to be with the person she assists. Even if she did go for the premier, I think it would be odd if she flew and kicked it with the Cullen party since she would be there on business. I just found Alice and bellas reaction to that news very odd under the circumstances.
beachblonde2244 chapter 38 . 3/9
And the Italy trip begins, I love Maggie :)
ymi2bz4t chapter 6 . 3/5
I'm sure someone has already mentioned this, but the bacteria you mentioned is commonly known as MRSA. If Edward had this in his stomach, he's probably going to either die or be out of commission for several months. There are only two antibiotics that work on this nasty bug, vancomycin and sulfa, and about 37% of the population is naturally allergic to sulfa. So, when MRSA becomes resistant to "vanc" and sulfa, then it will be 100% fatal. Treatment requires IV administration of these antibiotics for approximately two months, maybe longer... If you ever choose to publish this story, (and I think you should) you might think about changing his diagnosis to Shigellosis. It's a really common food poisoning bug. Thanks for writing. You do a really good job!
beachblonde2244 chapter 37 . 3/6
Their party was a roaring success. Edward was so cute taking care of her after. Love the two of them :)
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