|Reviews for Help Wanted|
| arteria chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
A very good chapter! It's never wrong with a little bit of truth or dare. ;-)
| kar0245 chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
Loved this chapter! Especially Jasper's apron haha! Can't wait for an update!
| Rachel1313 chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
Such a great chapter! Love all the family interaction. Love all the Bella and Edward flirting. Can't wait for what's next. UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON...as in please don't eat or sleep...just write, write, write! Love this story so much!
| daffy410 chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
Great story! Please update soon.
| AliceD82 chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
Yay I can sense the Edward and Bella relationship moving up to the next level, he is being so awesome and funny and with the cursing, he is the man! I love the dinner party idea and the truth or dare, hell this entire chappy is my favorite so far I felt like I was right there I almost wanted to yell 'hey throw a hotdog on the grill for me!' lol. Rosalie is awesome by the way in your story and I love how her and Bella just hit it off, once again your story rules, dont change a thing and I love the longer chapters! :-)
| luckycharmspinksubmarine23 chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
That was so adoreable. I love all the flirting and banter going on! Can't wait for what the next chappie. I love the long chappies too!
| jbutch chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
I liked the game you picked...very nice questions...and I'm glad you didn't stop it in the middle...can't wait for more!
| lynntjax chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
That was so perfect! The way she kissed him on the cheek as a thank you was very sweet, and if you start the next chapter out with them arriving back at their house, he should kiss her on the cheek as a thank you as well for making this so comfortable for him. Then- at the premier after party- Tanya can be trying to hang on him, but when Bella walks in he should leave her in the dust and grab Bella for a dance immediately- and this time he should man up and tell her how gorgeous she is ! I wanted to smack him when he teased her about just looking nice! Maybe he can tell her that he realises that she is his PA, and that getting involved might be a little tricky, but he just can't ignore the way he feels when she's around, or when someone mentions her name, or when he just thinks about her out of the blue (which is a lot). He needs to flat out ask her if she has been feeling any of these feelings, and if she would be agreeable to spending some time seeing where these feelings might take the two of them. (Your words of course will be much better than mine- I'm no writer, but the idea I think is good!) By the way thanks for the shout out at the beginning! Can't wait to see where we go from here!
| mythicalpolitician chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
Ah-mazing! You are awesome! As in the king! Love that you use my ideas by the way. I agree that sensitive edward whose still cocky and smug is beyond words! Keep writing, and how about the paparatzzi (how do you spell that?) catch some 'moments' between the two - like his hand on her back leading her anywhere! and how about he doesn't freak out? just ideas...
| CRob25 chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
I love the family interections. It reminds me of my crazy family. I've never heard of Truth or Dare being played that way, it sounds fun. Looking forward to reading more.
| fireonice1292 chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
omg i need more! this is fantastic
| msgrace30 chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
Wow...that was a great chapter! I loved the interaction with the entire group. You wrote it so well I could picture the scene in my mind. You did a great job of showing the closeness of the family and it was easy to see why the people just meeting that night got along so well. I really enjoy this story and I am always happy to see the next chapter. The interaction only keeps getting better!
| pillow912 chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
I loved this chapter - update soon!
| MovementNeverLies chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
I loved the party and it is going perfect. The relationship...everything.
I love this love story!
| Homebody chapter 17 . 5/4/2009
I am SO enjoying this story. Your writing is very good. Grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. very few "slips" and the story itself is overwhelming! I love where your Edward & Bella seem to be going. The journey is the best part. Right? You're doing fantastic and the slower pace only increases the tension, which is what everyone loves. The little "magic" moments make it wonderful. Can't wait for your next chapter!