Reviews for Help Wanted
carrottop14 chapter 18 . 5/6/2009
oh thats so cute my heart is racing and wow just so... wow:)

really good post post post
megibeth chapter 18 . 5/6/2009
great chapter :)
kar0245 chapter 18 . 5/6/2009
This chapter was intense but I loved it.. Can't wait for their convo!
reading-mypassion chapter 18 . 5/6/2009
OMG, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! it was amazing. and let me tell you, long chapters don't bother me, in fact i prefer them. so thanks for that.

please update soon *pouts*
Viola Cornuta chapter 18 . 5/6/2009
dandypants chapter!
colacherry chapter 18 . 5/6/2009
god tanya's such a skag.

glad edward got there in time! can't wait to see the morning after :)
conceivably.eternity chapter 17 . 5/6/2009
Dear god the suspense is killing me!

Please, this has been a wait, but can you please get them to kiss or something?

Im dying of anticipation.

Keep it coming!
The all mighty and powerfulM chapter 17 . 5/6/2009
this had to be my favorite chapter so far! i loved the family interaction, and edward and bella's comfortableness. cant wait for more :)
AriCullen1134 chapter 17 . 5/5/2009
just make them have sex already lol just kidding or am i umm lol love your story cant wait to read more!
emma217 chapter 17 . 5/5/2009
i want more!
cullengirl08 chapter 17 . 5/5/2009
This was a grat chapter; a lot of fun to read. I really enjoyed the family party and the little snippets between Bella and Edward. I think if they wouldn't have been interrupted in the kitchen by Alice that maybe (maybe) Edward would have kissed Bella. Of course, if the next chapter continues after the ride home, that of course, could still happen. Things are really becoming very easy and comfortable between them. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Imymadderthanyyou1996 chapter 17 . 5/5/2009
that is cruel!

that is so effin cruel!

i want them to kiss!

boo hoo!boo hoo boo hoo
sonyabrady1971 chapter 17 . 5/5/2009
holy shit! Emmett's truth or dare! That was awesome! I was LMAO through this whole chapter

As for the pace...I love me some built up sexual tension...I think you are doing a great job pacing just the way you are now...
nofeartina chapter 17 . 5/5/2009
I love, love Bella's internal dialogue, it's freaking hilarious...! :D

Great chapter, the tension is really beginning to build now, it can't be long before something happens now... Or..? ;)
Lonxly chapter 17 . 5/5/2009
Haha great chapter, i was in histerics a lot of the time - i just love Emmett and Jasper so much lol! I really felt like i was there for the Cullen's get together (well i wished i was anyway). It felt natural and flowed brilliantly And omg i dunno how Bella hasn't jumped Edward yet - i mean come on lol! I love reading this story, i hate waiting for the updates, i keep telling myself to hold back until you post at least 2 or 3 more chapters so i have more to read but i'm just too impatient! Update again very soon, please? Pretty please? Please with Edward AND a cherry on top! ;D
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