|Reviews for Help Wanted|
| jaime12576 chapter 16 . 5/2/2009
A friend suggested your story. It was a great way to pay a rainy Seattle day. I can't wait for the next update!
| AliceD82 chapter 16 . 5/2/2009
another awesome chapter! They are so freakin cute around eachother and I knew Edward was going to ask bella to stay at his place for longer I can't wait until the upcoming party I know there will be much more excitement around the corner
| Amie301 chapter 16 . 5/2/2009
This is a really good story, can't wait to see what happens next!
| jayc3218 chapter 16 . 5/2/2009
Another great chapter! Some parts where so funny and i love that moment between Bella and Edward with the whole lipstick scenario. Damn if they really do play guitar hero which i love or any video game for that matter they can make a bet to see who wins. i hope that Bella would surprise them with her skills and win lol. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Excellent work!
| jayc3218 chapter 15 . 5/2/2009
I love this chapter! Finally Edward decided to give himself a chance with Bella. I really like the pace that you have taken to develop Bella and Edward's relationship. I can't wait to read what happens next!
| mythicalpolitician chapter 16 . 5/1/2009
bella vs. edward guitar hero! bella wins - and only after is she told that edward NEVER loses guitar hero! that would rock! cute flirting - no drunken declarations that just make things akward, please... keep writing!
| MovementNeverLies chapter 16 . 5/1/2009
please. please update.
But maybe they should...hmm.
let me think of something for them to do and I'll pm you with an ideaa!
| stungmonkey chapter 16 . 5/1/2009
Cool chapter! I'm excited about the Cullen evening :)
Ok, my favorite adult party game is "Jello Shot Twister". You have to make jello shots in each color on the twister board and place them on the dots. Everytime you move a hand or foot to a dot, you have to take the shot. It works really well after you've already had a couple of drinks. :) Usually, who ever is spinning replaces the jello shots and helps hand them to people who can't reach them.
I'm thinking "Jello Shot Twister" might be a fun excuse for Bella and Edward to get really close...and maybe throw some Emmett in for comic relief :)
Can't wait for the update and let me know if you have any questions about the game :)
| bluocean444 chapter 16 . 5/1/2009
Awesome! Thanks for the shout out! I was excited! Ok so when I get the email that you posted a new chapter I'm like a little screaming girl! All activity stops and I must read immediately! I really like the sweet Edward. Of course cocky Edward has a great sex appeal and we all love that but sweet Edward is really making an impression on Bella. Thats not to say we dont need more cocky Edward teasing Bella more, because we do...no really we do. For the Cullen night I was thinking some video game wars, lots of drinking to relax our favorite couple into saying things they wouldnt normally say and possibly a little drunkin sexy dancing to make Edward forget his own name. I would also like to read about Edward and Bella having a midnight discussion where he really opens up to her about his past making their connection stronger. I love that this story can go on and on for sometime but I'm getting a little impatient with Bella being so blind that she cant see that Edward is in to her. I just wanna smack her around sometimes. The shower part was great but I wanna hear Bella accidentally tell Edward what happend when shes drunk and hear EPOV on his reaction.-OH Yeah! That would be awesome! Keep up the good work girl!
| rivruskende chapter 16 . 5/1/2009
I love it! Can't freakin wait for the next chapter!
| Zany Smile chapter 16 . 5/1/2009
aw, this chapter was awesome!
| pillow912 chapter 16 . 5/1/2009
Update soon! Maybe once they get to Edwards house decide to drink some beers and stare at each other like crazy.
| cullengirl08 chapter 16 . 5/1/2009
Good chapter. For the Cullen Evening, I suggest maybe some drinking with Edward and Bella where they finally admit their feelings for each other... Can't wait for the next update.
| the real teacher chapter 16 . 5/1/2009
OKAY! So...you are totally welcome! And sad to hear you've been sick...I was wondering about you! Glad to know that you are all better!
The chapter was marvelous...as usual!
I felt like the flow of the chapter was also very good and in sync. Everything seems to be flowing just perfectly! Great writing!
Now...you know I can't wait for more interaction between the two! I can't wait for them to finally connect...so I expect some more "connecting" at the Cullen party!
Keep up the good work!
| sweetnsassy5 chapter 16 . 5/1/2009
Love it! Great chapter