Reviews for Unveiled
Narxsist chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
This was an excellent read, It would be awesome to see more chapters as It feels unfinished (unless your intention is to add more then DATTEBYO!)

Hope to read more of your work :D

silvertv chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
nice story
edised chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
ohh wow
Gravity The Wizard chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Nice Story! My only complanit is there was not more to enjoy.
Evanez chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
I love the details! The last part was unexpected yet it made it so interesting! Can't wait till next chapter!( you are gonna right one yes?) :D