Reviews for The Birthday Girl
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
Awesome and hot story
Skylar chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
This is a perfect example of how even though sexual scenes are complicated to write as it is, one should write in full sentences and paragraphs. Not just moanings and groanings with a couple of naughty words! Very well structured and a good piece of literature! :)
Princess Of Souls chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Some cousinly hotness, very nice. Now that is a birthday gift i definatly wouldn't mind!
TheGirlInThePinkScarf chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
HOT! :)
Always-Here-Imani chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Hot stuff! I read in the author's note that their are other parts coming of this? I hope to see them soon!
mschris44 chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
prissyrican chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
That was one of the best Twilight Threesome I have read so far! Very Interesting ;)
chrtistell chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
This a Good story but not bad
IShipItAllAndThenSome chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Damn! I love your work! I wonder... have you had this experience?
flo and emo the soul sisters chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
wow! that was AMAZING! has to be one of the best stories i've read! i wonder what coud of happened if Mr Brandon walked in and enjoyed it rather too much? :-D fantastic job! cant wait to read more!
(flo doesnt really like reading M's!)
breanna1027927 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
really good
Lady Katsa chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Wow... that was amazing. I the classy air to it :D
dazzled eyes22 chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
This was the hottest threesome that I have ever read. The little tryst between cousins at the end was shocking, but damn hot. You need to revisit this story.
Stargirl888 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
This is one of the best stories I have read! Fantastic! Please write more encounters / similar stuff!
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