|Reviews for Wishful Thinking|
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/25/2015
#1. Okay so that ended with the best ending line EVER
#2. "Less flamboyant, more come hither."
I fucking died lmao this was bloody fantastic.
| Kitana Mayo chapter 2 . 7/2/2014
I like it
| KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 8 . 6/8/2014
| WeirdLittleStories chapter 7 . 5/4/2014
Wow. What a marvelously creative use of that ability! Very cool chapter.
| 753398445a chapter 8 . 12/15/2013
Well written, hot, sometimes funny, and slightly informative. If I could give stars this would get all of them. Also, I'm pretty sure that the chapters are in the same order as Sylar's aquired abilities are listed on his page on the heroes wiki. Not sure if this is a coincidence or both parties are using some sort of logical order that I can't find, but I thought it was interesting enough to share.
| Adi Who is Also Mou chapter 8 . 1/6/2013
I loved it. This is the first story I read since hitting this fandom, so well done!
| arjuna.bleu chapter 8 . 4/2/2012
Lots of fun. Last two chapters were rough on the spellcheck, etc but perusing your author's notes I see that you have a life so it happens _ Yes, indeed, I thought this was a lot of fun.
| readinggirl1989 chapter 8 . 2/16/2012
is there going to be a sequel?
| synjax chapter 8 . 10/1/2011
And now they'll FINALLY meet up! Yeahhhh... I *SO* can't wait! owo
...Wow. So she only noticed that he was there when she was looking for Mr. Muggles. The Mist exists.
He virtually emanated come-hither-vibes, combined with I'll-kill-you vibes. ~That is SOOO weird. O.o
In her mind, Sylar had about five expressions. Normal, mad, bloodthirsty, cocky and climaxing. ~Asteeeg \m/ So what's "normal" like? XDD
A smug smirk bloomed, and her palm slammed across his cheek before she could process the do and don'ts of slapping murderers. Especially ones that were super powered with every annoying power known to man. ~Annoying to you maybe. XD XP
She felt the success slide through him in the change in his body, and seized that opportunity to arch her body and throw him off of her.
Claire was up and skittering slightly as she vaulted out of the living room. ~*facepalm*
"Why are you resisting?" "Because you were less of an asshole in my head!" ~...Oh. NOW things can FINALLY get *fun*! ;D
He cupped her jaw and forced her to look at him.
He clenched his jaw and she watched a tiny shudder sink his eyes shut.
"I -," He started, and then grunted and pounded into her before burying his face into her neck. ~I somehow feel in my gut that he's gonna say something *pretty important* to her.
She seemed to jump as a bark of laughter came from somewhere deep in the house.
She glanced over her shoulder and looked back at him with a sheepish smile.
"Yeah, actually. He's in the kitchen." ~Oh. So that was Sylar. And Luke's gonna have fantasies of Claire from now on? HE BETTER NOT. OR ELSE SYLAR WILL MAKE HIM SUFFER A VERY PAINFUL DEATH. 3
Luke did, scoping out the way the shorts bent and clung to her ass cheeks. ~Luke's lucky Sylar wasn't able to see him ogling after HIS girl. 3
Luke froze, staring at them. He put two and two together and his jaw fell open.
Sylar pointed at the girl and then to him.
"Claire, this is Luke. Luke, this is Claire."
Luke couldn't stop staring.
Sylar gave him a dangerous smirk and crossed his arms.
"This is my invincible girl." ~THIS IS THE REVELATION. 8D
And personally, I love Chapter 6 and Chapter 8 the most. ;D
AWESOMENESS CHAPTER! AWESOMENESS STORY! AWESOMENESS YOU! 8D
Keep it up, yo! w
| synjax chapter 7 . 9/29/2011
"I was sent out west. I was to find a woman with a unique ability that had been documented in her as a child. It was...a really interesting skill. . . . She could tell when people were lying. Her skill was lie detection." ~Sue Landers?
"I was too late. WAY too late. Sylar had gotten to her so many months before. I wondered how it was no one knew she was dead." ~ Sue Landers.
"Did they strip you down merely for my viewing pleasure?" ~Whuuuuuuht? O.e
"If you're supposed to sound threatening, you're not doing a very good job. At least someone else would have something good to hurt me with other than a gun and whatever spare pipe you find in the hallway." ~Rock on! \m/
"You want me," Claire lied flippantly at him.
He just looked at her, the smirk still in place. Claire's body thrummed in surprise as her comment didn't make him twitch or shiver.
Her mouth fell open.
He lifted a shoulder with a cavalier expression.
"Boys will be boys," He told her. ~Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee w
He just sat there, slumped against the wall, all sweaty and dirty and weak. He still managed to sound Sylar, and look Sylar. ~'Cause that's just how awesome he is ;D
"Are we a cosmic joke?" ~Ehhhh?
"Well. I guess I'm a believer in reverse psychology." ~Asteeg \m/
That was so... DS. O3O
Her mind was focused on the amazing sex she'd just had in her dreams, and the strangeness of her behaviour. Her body felt heavy and satisfied, almost like it were cajoling her to go back to sleep and have round two, ~Meh! XD \m/ Mental sex ain't as awesome as the real thing tho :l
So she's finally realized through her wet dream that she actually wants a future together with Sylar. ALL HAIL THE AWESOME POWER OF DREAMS! /worship/
STILL AWESOME! KEEP IT UP! 8D
| synjax chapter 6 . 9/29/2011
Sylar's eyebrow shot up so fast it nearly lost its brakes and continued into his hairline. ~LOL! AWESOME! EPIC! XD \m/
Logically, his mind said no.
The feral pervert in his mind grinned and said yes.
Common sense said that he should answer his mental query logically, which naturally meant Sylar went with the feral pervert. ~...HUH? O.o
He thought too much with the head on his shoulders. He should really let the other one lead the way. ~Ah. So THAT explains it
The jiggling movement that all the females he'd been with despised and hid. All of them were completely oblivious to the fact that jiggle is actually what men look at. ~Guys can't tell why us girls hate the jiggling. O3O
"What the hell are you doing?" "Showering. What are you doing?" "Having my shower invaded?" "Isn't it nice?" ~Pfft! *facepalm to hide chuckling*
"Wait. What if the loofa remembers me washing you, and goes and tattles on us to the towels?" ~Well, it's not like the towels'll tell anyone else! They can keep a secret! 3
"I can take care of that. Just move back a bit. And give me a couple minutes -," ~Eegahds. *facepalm in embarrassment*
"Stop it! Okay! I'll wash you. That is what you do when no one is in the shower WITH you!" ~PRECISELY! 'Cause it's AWKWARD if a GIRL watches a GUY do it, but not the other way around! O_e
Shower electricity YOU LEAVE ME TYPELESS. *_* (wonderstruck)
Right. Okay. My mind is still adjusting to the shower sex scene, so please excuse me for not commenting on anything that happened in the shower sex scene except for the general stuff that happened (mentioned above). Yeah. Okay. I'm gonna go read Chapter 7 now. *_* (wonderstruck)
| synjax chapter 5 . 9/28/2011
I just realized that I only have this chapter and the next to go before I reach the chapter/point where they finally meet up (as I can observe from the titles OuO). YESSSSSSSSSS(insert infinite S's here)! /fist pump/
WHOA. Lyle's got a girlfriend? And I thought his GameBoy was his girlfriend. O.O
He was wearing some fitted black pants, cinched smartly over his narrow hips with a small black belt, and topped off by a pec-hugging black wife beater. ~The fangirl in me is now squeeing and running around at the mental image of Sylar in those particular clothes. *U*
The man was built like a walking heart attack. And he was oblivious to his affect on females. ~YEP! *W*
"Yes. I could take you." ~Why is it that I could give sexual innuendos to harmless stuff? O3O
It smelled of hot sand outside, and she knew out of any place in the world, she was safest in this car. With this homicidal maniac. ~That is so oxymoronic. XD
"...Is it demonstratable, or would it blow this state into oblivion and us along with it?" ~If he actually had the latter power, I'm pretty sure he would've used it to blow up New York instead of Ted Sprague's.
Wow. Now THAT puts the whole sound manipulation ability in a whole different light! O3O Me likey! OuO
Edible body be damned. ~She had just admitted it to herself in words. Wow. Okay.
"Not seductive. Erotic?"
"Yes!," She paused a beat and then realized what he'd suggested before shrieking; "NO!" ~lol! Ye just got caught. Twice. ;D
What better audience than the moon and the stars above? ;) Romantic, somewhat eerie, but overall adds a dramatic feel to it. In my opinion. :P
I know I keep repeating the same word to describe this fic and each individual chapter, but oh well, here it is again: AWESOME! 8D
| synjax chapter 4 . 9/27/2011
If having dirty dreams was what made the kid want to leave him alone in the morning, he was definitely going to have to become more imaginative when he slept. ~lol! AWESOME! XD \m/
Even if Luke didn't know who she was, he was obviously going to put two and two together eventually.
And when the boy added to four, his time with Sylar would end. ~Nice. XD
Sylar was as of yet undecided if he would take the pleasure in killing the kid, or leaving him some place interesting, like a gay bar in the middle of some unfamiliar city. ~A gay bar, huh? That'll give him a few sleepless nights and a nightmare or two. XP
'A quick movement as he was rubbed down the belly, he realized it was Luke.' ~OHMYGODS! I DO *NOT* NEED THAT IN MY THOUGHTS! XC
Sylar jerked his hand away with a strangled manly yelp. ~Emphasis on the "manly"...? XDD
...Wow. Claire is such a slut in Sylar's little mental fantasy o.o
"This room will remember everything I do to you. Don't you feel like it's watching you?" ~Wow. Gives a whole new meaning to "the walls have eyes" O3O
"Everything you're going to do to me?" She laughed, tiny white teeth appearing. "What are you going to do to me?"
"Everything I want to."
Her eyes flashed and she pushed against invisible restraints, bringing her face millimetres from his. Her mouth opened and she licked them quickly, smiling and looking into his eyes.
"Promise?" She whispered. ~Sylar, you bad, bad boy! ;D
I *so* love how they give "life" to inanimate objects (i.e., their clothing) X3
Pent up stress swirled in the water in the tub and then disappeared down the drain with a gurgle. ~I never would've thought that masturbating by mental fantasies could relieve stress/unburden you. O3O I'm so weirded out by this new information. O_e
All in all, here's the only things I can say to you: THIS IS AWESOME. YOU ARE AWESOME. KEEP IT UP! 8D
| synjax chapter 3 . 9/25/2011
"You can tell all this from the way some one stands." "Of course." ~Girls just know this stuff! ;D
"Split ends?" "Hair stuff." ~Priceless. XD
"Annnd! Annnd! He's going for it, YES, the shrug and glide! Alright! She knows how to play!" ~I don't know if I'm proud or ashamed to be a girl. Or probably both. O.e
"It would make sense to be a botanist. It's what her ability is." "And everyone follows their abilities. You're a crash-test dummy and Peter and Nathan run Petrelli Air, right?" ~Petrelli Air? AWESOME. \m/
A gold belly button ring? Man, that's hard to get! o 3o
You like it anyways. ~No I don't. I LOVE IT! *U*
| synjax chapter 2 . 9/25/2011
"Haha! I'm driving! I control the radio!" ~Wait, is that really the rule? O.O
"You know what we should really do? Have man talk." "Man talk. Do we get pillow fights and chocolate?" "That's girl talk." ~CHOCOLATE! o u o
"Hot chicks?" "Why are you asking me this?" "That's a yes. That is SO a yes. Blondes, redheads or brunettes?" ~That is so very teenage boy of him. 3
"Blond." ~Claire. OwO
Sylar went still as instead of Elle flashing through his mind, Claire Bennet's face appeared. ~Wait. So he was talking about Elle when he said that he'd seen a blond hot chick with powers? That sucks. ):T
The open-mouthed shocked silence that answered him led him to nod off into slumber with a peaceful grin. ~This should be a very, very interesting dream. ;)
"I'm not worried. If I was worried I'd be doing something annoying, like pacing." "I'm annoying?" "No. Pacing is." "My pacing is annoying?" "Pacing in general is annoying." "I'm annoying in general." "Is everything about you?" "When it's not about you, yes!" ~There's something about their fights every time they meet that makes me love them together more and more. x3
"You need a female companion. Someone to teach you how to be normal." ~Is she gonna offer herself to him soon? O3O
He sneered at her, knowing the barb would set her off. All sexual innuendos did. ~Unless you're talking to a green-minded person, then that innuendo wouldn't set them off. OuO
They're kissing but they're still fighting in between. THAT is one of the reasons why they're AWESOME together! x3
They're taking each other's clothes off and they're *still* fighting. Why am I so weird? o3o
Dominance is a very powerful thing. O3O
He was encouraged by the things she whispered in his ear, swearing and cursing him between moans and gasps. ~So swears and curses are actually encouraging words in disguise? o 3o
Phew! Good thing Luke was already in the room and not in the car! XP
Room 69 huh? Very fitting after his dream. xD
AWESOMENESS! THIS CHAPTER'S MAJOR *AWESOMENESS*! 8D
THEY'RE GONNA MEET SOON, RIGHT? O3O