So hot! I loved this fic. Well written and I love how in depth you went with the borderline obsession.

I love you so much...i mean...this was awesome

I love this story! So many Sylaire fics are to depressing and violent or way to sweet and OOC for Sylar, but you managed just the right amount of sociopathic Sylar so we could convince ourselves he was an okay guy at heart! You did a really good job at those simple differences in the way they see each other in their fantasies, Sylar is a little sweeter and Claire is just that bit more badassed. Please write more!

This was a gorgeous read, erotic and provoking. Thanks for the good time.

I promise to review every chapter, but after reading this entire story, I gotta say that I very much loved the last one the best. I like how you incorporated each theme from the previous chapters into this one, as well as the steamy, awesome sexiness... I very much hope to see more of this couple from you when you get the chance, and if ever you need an idea, take this one into consideration: kissing booth. I don't know... have fun with it. but if anyone can write a steamy sylaire revolving around that, it'd be you. Please write more when you can, and you're amazing!

-Wolf

This was such an awesome story. I loved the progression of Claire and Sylar's attitudes towards each other, evident in their dreaming-how it started out incredibly violent on both ends and gradually drifted towards affectionate. Absolutely loved it. This last chapter was a great way to sum it all up and bring it to reality in a passable way. Thanks for such a good read!

Ah! Can't believe I had to wait overnight to be able to finish this.

oh geez, her journal? what was she thinking writing down those dreams in detail? she has a brother, they always break into those things anyways, silly girl.

"his psychopath was showing." lol, love that line!

"fingers tips brushing over the nipple pebbled through her thin shirt" oh my...

awe, all she had to do was say the word and he changed his approach. love it!

awe, he's giving her an out. *sigh* i adore him.

oh! what was he going to say? that was cruel of you to not let him finish what he was saying.

squee! love the afterwards, laying there and snuggling and yet they still manage to be somewhat snarky to each other.

hell yah! fantastic ending. greatest sylar/claire i've read in quite some time. thank you thank you thank you!

in response to the a/n at the end, i'd say this last chapter was my favorite, because it was real and not just fantasy. loved the smut combined with humor. you do it so well!

eek! i've been offline for ages, oh how i've missed this one!

"Five minutes with Matt Parkman and I would." lmao! hell yah.

.god! wow. let's just stick with wow.

ah! loved the ending!

"So warn the nearest thing you’re liable to take advantage of." Nope, hubby receives no warning and he gets no explanations. he just enjoys, lol.

Wow - this was incredible! Keep writing these, please!

I only just found this and oh dear God I think you killed me.

Seriously, I'm sure your career is great and all but you are wasted in law. Ignoring the hotness (oh the hotness) I love your characterisation. I loved your Sylar.

So yeah, great, great fic. Thank you!

Wow, I'm loving this so far. It's pure smut, sure, but it's some of the best written smut I've read in fanfiction in a long time. I love how their fantasies differ. Especially about the thing you said in the a/n on how Claire's subconscious perceives Sylar differently than her awake fantasies, which happens to play out in a slightly more "schoolgirly", romantic fashion.

The only thing that bugged me in this chapter was that either Sylar's wearing two belts or there was an editorial glitch. First Claire ripped his belt off throwing it against the window inside the car only to tug at his belt buckle in the next paragraph. Maybe it's just me and I missed something (it's past midnight, brain equals mush at this point) but I thought I'd let you know.

[Copypasta to let you know what I mean:

She unbuckled him and carelessly swung the belt aside, hearing it clatter as it hit the window and then re-coiled into place. He had tried to sit up, and she planted both hands on his shoulders and pushed him back, sweeping forwards and dominating his mouth again as her nails raked in lazy figure eights over his skin.

[...]

She got to his belt buckle and pulled on it playfully.

[...]

She pushed them down and then used her feet to force them completely down over his butt, hearing the belt clink on the dirt at his ankles.]

Anyhow, awesome story. -

Wow. That was such a sexy story. I totally loved it all. And the scenes were so much more creative than my fantasies about Sylar have been (fantasies I now realize have been much to simple and sorely lacking in making use of his interesting powers.) Thank you for jolting my world!

You do law? So do I :D but I don't have nearly as much creativity as you do :) Awesome chapter.

Very very awesome. I'm loving it so far :) I only found one spelling mistake: definitely, not definately.

Oh miGod. *breathes* Thank you. Just...thank you.

And the sound manipulation chapter? Yum.