|Reviews for Come over here already!|
| ChibiKitsuneOfEgypt chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Very nicely written. A few grammatical and sentence strutcture errors, but overall very good. ️
| pwenie chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
:] hhaha. Cute
| EggPanPockyMan chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
The scene with Miyagi and the ice cube made me want to review, lol! Aside from the spelling mistakes, awesome story! Cookies for you!
| hoigui chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
wow! Just wow :)
| Ayumubunni chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
I love it!
| Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
| Shadow101202 chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
If by beta you mean editor I would be happy to oblige you, you can contact me at . Please send me an e-mail anyways if you already have one/this isn't what you were looking for. Thx.
| FreshPrinceLover chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
LOVED IT! that was hot, and so so so detailed. well done!XD
| RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
damn this was soo sexy
| shadow chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
I think this is the best Terrorist sex that I've read so far! Oh gosh, the great release of the 2-month-long abstinence! Great job! I really enjoy reading this very much! :)
| ihsakak chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
this is truly amazing.
i love fanfic sex scene about Miyagi and Shinobu
i dont know hwy but they seem to be the best couple when it comes to privacy. ahaha :D.
i really like this.
| fuwariin chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
AWESOME ! Miyagi n Shinobu is my favorite junjou pair !
Sure i'll be ur beta
If u want
| Hypercritical-Q chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Pretty hot XD
| heavensangelQ chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
oh meh garwsh! that was a hawt and great story! :3
| Hanamaru chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
aw so sweet so hot!