Reviews for Breaking Traditions A Matter Of Honor
Serena Yvonne Li chapter 1 . 4/13/2016
I really REALLY Love the story! It is was awesome! - Until you made my brother(AKA Shang) a farmer -.-' Lol JK Its still great! (But still... I hate Shang being a farmer...)
Don'tCare001 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
I ioved the story but I didn't like that you made Shang a farmer... Still it's good!
Mi li ya mu chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Ahhh! I loved this story! :)
ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Great job! I loved the story! :)
BlueEyes chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
Your grammar gets in the way of the story. It's very hard to understand who is speaking. It is a cute story, very sappy. I agree with one of the reviewers...why did you make Shang a farmer?

And from your stories, I can tell how much you've changed in writing styles. It's gotten a lot better.
Alice Prince chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Nice job!
xxxDestinyxxxLove chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Its creative but its a bit short . Good work , though .
zaynah chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
I know, this review is like 7 years late, but I've vowed to review everything I read. ;D I loved the story. The plot was really good, but it would've been even better with a beta. (my constructive criticism) Cute!
Stine chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
the idea was great.. and at first it also was a great story, but after a while, you just slapped something together and made the story a bad soap.. and I also found it more then a little annoying that you kept writing little notes like (yeah right shang!)

And besides that it was annoying then

it was also a bad way to write your personal opinion into the story, and when im trying to read it and picture the story in my head, like the scene were Shang think that it maybe would be nice to marry Lah Bu and im siting and thinkting "oh no! What will mulan do now? How will the story end?" and then suddenly there comes a note that says " YEah righ you idiot!" :S

so can you see how that ruin some of the fun?

Okay, apart from the notes and the slack at the end, it was a good story, and the idea was nice too. The summary was terrific, nice and short. :)
henred5 chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
gud guyd...a true fairy tale!

pepe ok chapter 1 . 3/5/2005
i've reviewed before, but i read your story again because i like it so much. its really sweet and i love how everyone was in character and the humor you used.
MiniEllie chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
wow, this story is brilliant! i really like Lah Bu being called the spoilt brat, because she was a spoilt brat!
Kit chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
You are a good writer with many good ideas. I enjoyed reading your story greatly. I would like to make just one suggestion. There were times during the story where everything seemed a tad rushed and a bit choppy. For your next story, I suggest you work a bit more on your flow. Anyway, wonderful write and I hope to see more.
pepeok chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
great fic! mushu was hilarious. u kept everyone in charactwer!wow!great fic!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
Why did you make Shang a farmer?
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