|Reviews for Two Hearts Beat as One|
| AddyD90 chapter 16 . 9/13/2012
Just found your story today and loved it... Please continue as I wonder what is going to happen next?
| bamagal110 chapter 16 . 6/12/2012
i love this story so far. I was wondering if you were gonna finish it...In a way Bella brought all this on herself she was with Jake all the time and altho Edward was gone alot he was not cheating and it was a total accident the first time anyway
| 10010 chapter 15 . 5/15/2011
So after reading some of the other comments I must say I'm kind of shocked with all the hate/passive aggressive comments about Bella being with a woman. First of all, the story description states that there would be some femslash - if that isn't your thing DON'T READ IT & then complain about it. I will never understand why people do that. Also, it's sad that in 2011 people still have problems with same sex couples. How does a relationship between 2 consulting adults of the same sex affect you? Live & let live people. I also just read a comment where someone said that they "wouldn't mind being friends with them" if they just kept the details of their sex lives to themselves. Wow - seriously, them? You wouldn't mind? Don't do anyone any favors. Sorry for my rant it's just in this day & age where I see my dear friends struggling to just live a normal life (adopting children, marriage, etc.) that the rest of us take for granted & be discriminated against at every turn, even in a fictional virtual one - it makes me so mad. Now that I have that off my chest, I must thank you for being brave enough to write about a topic you yourself said people are giving you shit for - so happy you are sticking to your guns & continuing down the road you are currently exploring. Don't let nasty comments from close-minded people get you down & I hope you update soon! Thanks.
| 10010 chapter 16 . 5/15/2011
Sorry - Edward's a pig. There's no way he did not know what he was doing. Plus he strayed multiple times with Tanya as mentioned before & with Lauren...he's disgusting. There is no forgiving that, no excuse.
| motherbeatrice chapter 16 . 3/2/2011
Well, I really liked your story, until you started with the Zafrina thing. I know, but there is something so special in general about Edward and Bella, just not your story, the whole Twilight thing. This just doesn't feel right. I know she has been hurt by men, but...I'll keep checking on the story, but it will be with trepidation...
| FarDareisMai2 chapter 16 . 1/19/2011
Oh stupid, stupid Edward. *sigh* Always jumping to conclusions, getting drunk . . . jumping to more conclusions . . . Great chapter. Hopefully you have another one in you before school starts!
| Chicklette chapter 16 . 1/17/2011
So glad to see a new chapter, here. E's still a terrible ass, but *maybe* not as totally bad as i thought.
| AZIdolFan chapter 16 . 1/16/2011
Edward is still an ass. Being drunk is just an excuse. He could have told bella and begged for forgivness right away but instead he lied and covered up his cheating. That means he's an ass. I can't wait for more.
| dreamngo4it9 chapter 16 . 1/10/2011
i really liked this chapter
and have missed this story
i cannot wait for more
i hope what i'm thinking and how i perceived this chapter is what actually happened... i cant wait for more, more bella...
update soon please!
| vampiregurl chapter 16 . 1/10/2011
well he was a little too late. gosh tanya of all people? there was more than one right. he never learned.
| elyseclee888 chapter 16 . 1/10/2011
Hey! I'm so happy you updated!
i really adore this story and i hope Edward and Bella end up together again!
I'm a bit confused, last time in chapter 15 Bella was in 2006... now Edward's in 2008... explain?
| Elyse chapter 16 . 1/10/2011
Aw he still holds hope!
i hope they get back togetherr! :)
| Kgunter34 chapter 16 . 1/10/2011
Great chapter. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
| NZTwilighter chapter 16 . 1/10/2011
So excited to get an update - thank you and happy new year!
I understand Edward's frustrations - the Bella/Jacob situation would have driven me to breaking point, too but he still dealt with it wrongly. And for that I still find I'm disgusted with him.
Though I'm sure he's just as disgusted with himself.
| i.luv.twilight2 chapter 16 . 1/10/2011
How could Edward think that if he was never around to help with the wedding preparations then no one else should help Bella either? Plus, he gets time off and then he spends it drunk with Tanya? What a hypocrite! I hope Bella never returns to Edward. If he could screw around on her when they were engaged and 'in love', what's to stop him from doing it again? Move forward Bella, not backwards.