Reviews for Just a Man's Plaything
hauntedpumpkin56 chapter 5 . 6/27
Loving the story
Jena chapter 5 . 6/3
It's good, it makes me sad an then happy and its really good. However, i want a plot twist. I feel like a horrible human for wanting this but can Jared be a dick too? Or maybe one if his friends? Thanks, good story.
Mr. Malfoy chapter 5 . 12/30/2015
After the parents get back, Kim secretly brings Jared to her house, thinking both her parents won't come back in a while. (A day or two maybe) When Kim and Jared are talking in Kim's room, the parents unexpectantly come home early. While hearing her step dad's footsteps, Kim shoves Jared in her closet, knowing that her step dad would never exept her bringing a boy in the house. When the step dad comes in the room, he severely starts abuses Kim. Jared who is still in the closet, finally knows who has been hurting Kim. He steps out of the closet, and gets in a HUGE argument with the step dad. (That's all I have thought of. Maybe the story ends with Jared killing the step dad by shooting him or something and Kim and Jared get married.
Hunter chapter 5 . 12/30/2015
Stabbing the step father
annoontje chapter 5 . 8/9/2013
I absolutely LOVE your storie! It's so.. I just can't find a good word to explain it but it is totally AWSOME! Please write more?! X
Annabel7777777 chapter 5 . 5/6/2013
Awwwwwww! You NEED to write more or I might burst from the curiosity that I filling my head right now!
Wolfiegirl 26 chapter 5 . 8/27/2012
Hmmm maybe Kims parents come home and the step dad finds out about Jared and "visits" her more often and hurts her more and she cant get to school cause of the pain? OR maybe Jared hears her crying while her step dad is "visiting" her and he jumps in and pulls him off and takes kim out of the house and then he calls the cops and kim has to tell her mom and maybe she doesnt believe her and kicks her out of the house and Jared's mom lets her live with them... those are just some of my ideas!
kate x wolfe chapter 5 . 8/4/2012
epic! love it :-)
Oridara chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
This is interesting. There must be a reason that Jared imprinted on Kim. Maybe he needs to save her?
MCR Killjoys chapter 5 . 8/5/2012
please update soon

Becky xxx
Wolfiegirl 26 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
I like it!
ChloeCullen99 chapter 5 . 6/7/2012
hey please keep writing this story i find it inspirational and heart warming. i don't want the chapters to end it's so good! please keep writing!

ChloeCullen99
ChristinaAguileraFan chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
I love this so far
oOkatOo chapter 5 . 1/25/2012
Wow I really have enjoyed your story so far! I really like that it is not the typical Kim Jared story of the "perfect couple". A suggestion for future plot could be that Jared also endured some form of abuse and that is how he gets Kim to open up about her step father. Also another interesting scene could be a phone call from the step dad. I would also introduce a bonfire here soon so that you can start to plant the seed of understanding into Kim's mind. Hope that my suggestions help and that you update soon!
Just-Soldier-On chapter 5 . 8/3/2011
I like this story, I hate what happens to Kim though. I hope Jared kills him. Or seriously hurt him.

I hope you update sometime soon
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