Reviews for The Skater and the Player
Guest chapter 3 . 11/10/2013
Ok 3 things:
1. This is going WAY to fast
2. It's WAY to cliche
3. And it's weird (WAY)
Guest chapter 7 . 10/27/2013
Name- Elizabeth (Lizzie)
Age- 17
Personality- bubbly, funny, sarcastic, flirty
Appearance- long, blonde, curly hair, big blue eyes, small nose, pierced ears, big boobs, freckles, mascara, eyeliner, addicted to miss sporty lip gloss
Relevance- Edwards first love
She had to move to London, met at new years eve party aged 15 in new York. Fell in love her abusive father tore them apart and she moved away incredibly beautiful
gerryade.merrygold chapter 10 . 11/30/2012
update plz
sara.loves.edward.cullen22 chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
hey this is a realy good story
e-sam chapter 3 . 8/23/2010
this story is so stupid and stereotypical i think im gonna puke. no offense but try to use a more original plot...
browneyedgirl122 chapter 10 . 8/1/2010
I like the story. Update soon!
Butterflies-LastForever chapter 10 . 7/31/2010
SilverViolet96 chapter 10 . 7/25/2010
heyy! i love your story! if you still need characters im called kayleigh, i have long black hair with bright hot pink streaks in it. i am skater and wear baggy trousers skater shoes baggy/tank tops. im into rap, r&b and hip hop. my skateboard goes everywhere with me. this is the real me not made up promise! :D
lover6785 chapter 10 . 7/24/2010
see when i thought this story was about a player and a skater i thought she would put up a fight to stay away and how does that make him a player when kissed her in a cocky way
imatwin12497 chapter 7 . 6/29/2010
Um good story so far.

You can use my sister and I if you'd like. my name's Stephanie Nicole (you can think of the last name)and my sister's is Rebecca Jean. Were twins, 17 years old, into sports like softball and foolball. We have long dark dirty blond hair, were both 5 foot 6.

good luck with your story! your doing great!
Pipipipipie chapter 7 . 2/5/2010
my name's Anna. i am very bubbly and smart. I love playing sports and hanging with my pals. I am 11 and I have dirty blond hair, green eyes, and pale skin.
Black Eyed Hawk chapter 10 . 1/31/2010
cullenized chipmunks chapter 10 . 1/25/2010
ooh! this is so good.

keep it up
gofuckyourmom777 chapter 10 . 1/10/2010
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let me be in ur story :)

but i still love it
Ms. Kaylea chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Awesome story!
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