Reviews for Catapult
joti52887 chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
"Christ on a pogo-stick" had me laughing for awhile great story so far. ill continue reading as soon as i get a chance and ill also check any other work you have. you made a new fan today
Angry Madmoth chapter 10 . 9/2/2011
I just finished reading this and I have to say, I truly enjoyed reading this. Your characters are well-though out, the plot moves along nicely, and kept me reading this until I finished reading. Keep up the good work.
Valikdu chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Am I the only one who pictures Bethany as Tricia Helfer?
bfg10k17 chapter 10 . 12/28/2010
First she was like a female Joker, than you gave a depth to the character and it came alive. I could pretty damn imagine Beth as a ME character. Well, not as Shepard's sister, but as some relative over the far-end of his/her family branch. I enjoyed this story. Thx. :)
Hewhoislost chapter 10 . 12/2/2010
great story man,funny as hell, your Bethany character is well thought out, hope to see her more stories.
FireAndBubbles chapter 10 . 8/31/2010
I know you finished this over a year ago, but I enjoyed reading it and wanted to say so.
fullhans1 chapter 10 . 5/22/2010
Good story.
rutger5000 chapter 7 . 11/9/2009
Sorry that I didn't review for the other chapters, I read them ofline. (Tumbs up for the combination firefox, and saving history)

I really enjoyed reading the story so far. I succeeds to have a very typical fanfic plot (Non Canon character meets main characters and tells them what to do) without making a fool out of itself. But I must admit that I don't know the canon characters either. So Beth doesn't seem any more non canon then August and William.

But without any doubt it's entertaining, fun to read and written in a clever way.

I say congrats on a good fanfic.
rutger5000 chapter 2 . 11/8/2009
You're writting is very entertaining, which is great. Putting a joke between every few sentences, makes it a lot more fun to read a story.
rutger5000 chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
It's really good. Personally I would have liked the chapter more, if it was divided in smaller chapters. Just for reading comfort.

Otherwise the chapter was a joy to read. Funny and very well written. Though your writtings style sometimes seems a bit repetative.

Still I enjoy your writting, and I look forward to read more of your work.
lazyguy90 chapter 10 . 6/4/2009
Brilliant. Nice work on this. It was very cool. Keep at it.
Andy Wong Fey Hong chapter 6 . 5/28/2009
Oh God, I was going to write you a super long review once I finished, but this chapter really cracked me up. Well, the last chapter did as well, I'm astounded you know Space: Above and Beyond, as that show is rather obscure. Not to mention numerous pop culture references which I'm delighted to say I know as well. I'm wondering which Battlestar Galactica u are talking about, the old one or new one.

Anyway, this whole sexuality business confusion with Bethany is cracking me up. At Shepard's suggestion to look at pornn sites, I laughed out loud like a loon.

I'm really enjoying your fic. Hope you got a great ending lined up, that hopefull doesn't end with Bethany doing both Liara and Kitty.


Andy Wong
Liesie chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
You named your Shepard "Augustus?" *facepalm* At least his sister is interesting and in possession of a name likely to belong to more than three people in a modern city. I don't know why, but the hyper salarian is so far my favorite character. Well, original character. Wrex, Ash, and sarcastic Shepard still rock my socks off.
C. Dawgz chapter 10 . 5/12/2009
Sorry I'm considerably overdue in reviewing this; things have been rather hectic. Anyway, this is a great story, and it ranks up there with your best, which is saying someting. Beth is a character I'd very much like to see more of; her exploits as a mercenary can only be hilarious.
Larask chapter 10 . 5/7/2009
I LOVED THIS STORY. Nice work. I haven't read all your stories, but among the ones I did, this is the best one. Well, I just hope you have more ideas with Beth, so that you can write more. :)
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