Reviews for Doughnuts make the world go round
Guest chapter 15 . 6/6/2015
How we all wish we could yell shut up and not get "Biotch Slapped" or something similar.
A-noy-mouse chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
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MoonGoddessSerenity chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
i LOVE Usagi/Vash pairings!

~*~Serenity~*~

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Veggie Briefs chapter 21 . 8/17/2003
T_T so sad...*sniff*...I LOVE IT! -
Patrick chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
That waz gr8 who waz the blue eyed guy at the end i hope it waz legato please please let it be legato
LunarPrincess chapter 21 . 8/12/2003
HOLY SHIT! great story my god. its 2 30 in the morning and i'm wired with all the laughing. hehehehe. i loved it. must read seaqel but it will wait.
Sailor-Kaio-Cannon chapter 21 . 8/6/2003
i love your story so much that i read it all the time ...so you have to finsh soon

love ya

sailor_kaio_cannon-{- :P ;)
kat chapter 21 . 6/25/2003
hey,

This is my first EVER review.
teri chapter 21 . 3/28/2003
this story was so AWASOME! It was os funy i could not stop...lol..lol.. u get the point

i started from the first chap to the last. I was the good and boy i sure needed that lol :D
Momoko chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
I've just realised... I'ver reread your stories four times! O_O I'm obsessing over vash/usa pairings, I guess...

Well, please update "Stairway to Eden" soon!

I'll be sendin yeh an inspirational piccy! Well... I hope it's inspirational -_-

Oh well! _
Valysis chapter 21 . 12/14/2002
Oooooh! I like this story! I like, I like! Sat through and read the whole thing in one sitting! Its sooo cute! lol, cute Vash-sama! I think you did a wonderful portrayal of what would happen if this incident were to occur! Good job! *big thumbs up* I'm just itching to read the sequel now! Hyaku Hyaku~ (quick, quick!)
Jivia chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
I must say, for a fanfic that's not very well written, it's highly entertaining. The author captures the character of Vash fairly well, but I can't help but scratch my head: Why is Vash so melancholy? He lapses into serious mode much too often and suprisely quick to anger. He also lacks the vast wisdom of the canon character.

As for Usagi, she was more accurately portrayed and her reactions were quite entertaining. The senshi in general, I can't really comment on. They were hardly involved in the fic. It was as if they were there just for cameos.

All in all, it was an entertaining fic. Art it was not. It was straight-foward, short, and to the point. Overall: 6.8/10 Above Average.
Momoko chapter 21 . 12/1/2002
*smiles mischeviously* WAY TO GO CHIBI-USA! WOOOOOOOT! XD And who is the light blue-eyed stranger? hmmm... Anyway, I still have to be angry with you 'cause you made Vash sad... Ehhh, i have a feeling everything's gonna be okay, so I won't be all evil and stuff. _
Momoko chapter 7 . 11/29/2002
T_T gyah! and I thought my fic is angsty! STOP MAKING VASH IN PAIN!
mystlady chapter 21 . 11/23/2002
That was excellent. I had to do a lots of reading. I'm glad Setsuna gets a minor role in this ficcie And the scene where Haruka flirts with Vash was my fave scene of all
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