Reviews for Wild Swan
BelleDuJour chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
I'm hooked. It's so sad to read how they met and fell in love and compare it to where they are now. I can understand Bella's loneliness and need to change and find a happier situation.
EdwardsKitten chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
So damn intriquing. More please.
keepingupwiththekids chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
I just found your story - and I am so intrigued!
jfergie chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
I'm so intrigued. This story leapt out and grabbed me from the very beginning. Love the writing and emotion. Can't wait to see what happens next. Will you be doing alternating POV?
kolfan88 chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
Cant wait to see where this goes..just wonering however if you are going to keep it canon? Is this oneof those stories where Edward and Bella don't stay together for the remainder of the story?
skg910 chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
Can't wait to find out what happened to cause Edward to become so cold and empty. Great story!
RedVelvetHeaven chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
You have my attention.

Remember people, it takes two, and so far we have only heard her side of the story. He is coming off as a douche so far, but somewhere along the line she must have dropped the ball too.

Will we hear from him?
n0 l0nger in use chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
I wonder what happened to them and if they just grew a part like many couple do.
jimemon chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Very intriguing, can't wait to
nermalasu chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
oh that is so sad...great chapter though...i really love how you are throwing the flashbacks in...however i have a feeling the family already knows. you usually can't hide your unhappiness. can't wait for your next update.
nerac chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
Saw this posted over on Twilighted and decided to check it out.. I'm anxious to see where this goes. :)
Melissa228 chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
Aw...I wonder how things went so wrong...from meeting in college to divorce. The loneliness and sadness Bella is feeling is heartbreaking and from the way it seems she deserves better than a husband like Edward...who is acting like a total douchebag.

You are off to an AWESOME start...keep it up BB.
Melissa228 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Well...well...well...what do we have hear? I didn't know you were so close to putting this sneaky little bitch.

Wonderfully intriguing to
blackwolfM23 chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
Brava! Brava! This is the first fic of yours that I have read. I really liked it. I felt the emotion as it just leaped off the page. I love your Rose & Emmett, especially Emmett. Looking forward to more. Can't wait to see what happens next. I have to say I wanted to hit Edward up side the head as I'm saying "Whats wrong with you, boy? Get your act together and go after your women"
ftskelsey chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
wow. that was super long, but really good! i live in chicago so it's kinda neat to know what you're talking about when you mention places :) keep it up!
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