|Reviews for The Nomads|
| Miss Kasumi-Marie chapter 10 . 10/17
I'm all late for the story, but please. Please update! This story's got my hooked! I love how you have everyone in character. I really want Atem and Tea to have a happily ever after ugh. This cliffhanger ugh ;-; Please don't abandon this masterpiece, i hope sometime in the future you come back and finish it -
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1
Nope. Still sucks. You fail at life. You were obviously dropped on your head when you were born which means you are brain damaged and autistic despite you looking like an old woman according to your Youtube videos. Think about the children for crying out loud!
| NewHorizons977 chapter 10 . 9/12/2016
THIS IS NOT A FANFICTION. it should be a novel. the writing is amazing, the blot is new and very well done. i enjoy reading it very much as if it was an actual book(i like it more then veronica decided to die which is an actual book i am reading) please continue it. and I can see why Marik killed his father, that illiterate man if he read the Quran he would have know that the first word in it was freakin' READ, i hate such people who want to control others.
Anyway, i am waiting for next chap. please write it
| Lexik chapter 10 . 1/16/2015
The analogy made at the beginning about Modern!Isis being like a beetle really stuck with me throughout. Especially how one of her brothers only had the shell, and the other only had the wings, so she stayed with them.
Then, Téana's observation that stories about the Egyptian gods made the deities sound more human than stories about humans. That really sums up a lot of old mythos really well, and gave me a bit of a chuckle too.
Also, I fully agree with the silliness of the wigs from both perspectives. Greedy indeed to wear hair when you already have your own, and redundant to cut it off only to put it back on. Hehe.
Ahh, Atem's proposal is worrisome. And who does he think he is, asking someone to marry him without offering his real name? Right after she came clean about everything, too.
A lot went wrong there for him, though. Poor guy.
I'm curious when the stuff in that second chapter (first by your numbering, second by default) will connect to the main story.
In any case, kudos :)
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/11/2014
This was a wonderful read! I hope that if you ever find some time to spare, you will consider returning to this story! Thank you :)
| morrisliana chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
I AM SO HOOKED! Please make another chapter soon so I can read more
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/11/2014
I'm hooked! This story is amazing! I really want to know what happens next, please update soon :)
| EllieMurasaki chapter 10 . 1/27/2014
Oh no, Teana. This isn't going to go well, is it.
| mollycoddle chapter 10 . 5/12/2013
NO DON'T MISUNDERSTAND SHE LOVES YOU AND YOU HAVE TO LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER IN THIS CRUEL WORLD.
Yeah, really great fic, makes me all emotional.
| mollycoddle chapter 3 . 5/12/2013
I. Am. So. Excited.
| mollycoddle chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
I haven't even read YGO and I adore this.
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/19/2013
Aughh... Please, please update. I love this story so much, it's one of the best that I have ever read. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Minirowan chapter 10 . 3/16/2013
This story is simply amazing.
I still don't understand the significance of the chapter with Valon and Rafael. I can only assume they will play a role in protecting Teana and the others or something along those lines.
In any case, I hope this matter with Teana's deliriousness is cleared up soon. Given the wonderfully crafted backstory, and your skill at characterizing him, I hate seeing Atem distressed. I have come across too many Egyptian fics in which he's cruel and egotistical. This Atem is much closer to how I imagine he would have been like; he is both confident like Yami and innocent like Yugi. I always thought Atem was a fusion of the two to some extent, given he is Yugi's past life.
Your writing is awesome to say the least. You've also done a marvelous job building up Teana and Atem's relationship. It was easy to see how their upbringing affected their personalities, how their lives paralleled each other, and how effortlessly it was for them to relate with each other and become close.
I can't ignore what you've done with Jono and Maibe ether; their relationship progresses more slowly but every moment you show us is significant and shows great depth to both characters.
Seren is also a joy; that she and Hopki have become so close is heartwarming. On that note, I'm curious to see how Seren's necklace becomes an heirloom for female Tomb Keepers. Since it was such a meaningful gift I assume she somehow becomes one of the first generation of Tomb Keepers.
Also, I hope Teana's vision was a jumble of possible futures. But really, that was horrible timing, with her and Atem finally going somewhere and all.
Anyway, I really hope you'll update this soon. I've exhausted myself looking for good AnzuxYugi fics, and this is more than good, it is spectacular!
| Jocasta Silver chapter 8 . 3/1/2013
Yikes! So now the tribe is coming after them. I like the conversation between Jono and Maibe, a really good exploration of their developing relationship.
| venusmelody chapter 10 . 1/28/2013
Whoops, I didn't realise that I hadn't signed in when I reviewed... (mine is the one that started with "wow"