Reviews for True colors
bookivore chapter 12 . 6/14/2012
I found it a bit jarring, the idea that the Headmaster didn't have access to basically everything especially lockers, students don't have that kind of privacy in the Muggle world and the Wizarding world surely is not more progressive. I could accept that the staff might have warded off their own private territories but the idea that the Gryffindor Quidditch locker room was protected from the Headmaster? Who would have gone to all that trouble, when would it have been done, and why did Mr. Nosy Headmaster not dismantle it years ago? (Not a serious question, just a thought to ponder.)
missisaac chapter 35 . 6/8/2012
loved this story well done :D
RichardGrayson Robin-Nightwing chapter 35 . 1/10/2012
great story, though i would have named the twins that harry had after his mother and father and godfather, but otherwise great. Remus sons name was Teddy Remus Lupin, but it was interesting how you took teddy and john instead of remus.
ketsuekilover chapter 35 . 12/4/2011
Awe i loved it.
Woodland Spirit chapter 35 . 10/29/2011
Great story. I loved it
Please chapter 6 . 9/21/2011
Tell me you started using a beta, and this gets better in later chapters? Because this is so poorly written it's barely readable.
Wiw chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
You sure weren't lying, your grammar sucks. Add sentence structure, spelling, dialogue & believable characterizations.

It's an interesting idea, and could be a great story if you took the time to develop it, and cared to have the characters sound like themselves.
iS chapter 3 . 9/17/2011
"..he had lost his godfather and the last connection he had to his dad and Sirius was badly injured in the hospital."

I think you mean Remus?

You badly need a Beta.
Zexion Monochrome chapter 3 . 8/28/2011
Just a tip, re-read your sentences a few times or have a friend do so.

"She prayed for her little cousin's sake they would stand by him for she was not sure Harry could take any more, but she was not sure"

You don't need to repeat that she wasn't sure. It confuses the reader when you reiterate something simple, throws them off of the point you wanted to make.

Also, little things like writing 'as' instead of 'at'.

All small details. An overall good story though!

Keep it up.
shiftyless chapter 35 . 7/5/2011
start 2 finish very great it is
BettyBoopSweden chapter 35 . 1/3/2011
A very nice story. It was interesting and good. A bit fluffy at the end but after all the drama in the beginning it was nice to see that everybody got a good life.

I love the baby-names and the fact that you make them mean something, that'a a nice touch.

Thank you for sharing :)

Jemma Blackwell chapter 35 . 12/30/2010
That was such an inspired choice for Brodie Martin's name, that was perfect! I looked up the hyacinth and it is a beautiful white wildflower from California, not too girly. You really did your research on the names, they were wonderful.
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 35 . 12/5/2010
love it! there was something about the last few chapters i didnt really like as much, i think it was that they seemed kind of rushed and less detailed, especially since you didnt really have much of harry and severus and then next thing you know they were getting married, i didnt realize they'd gotten so close and whatnot
krynn chapter 11 . 11/11/2010
be living not believing. you really need to check your spelling and make sure its correct before uploading. i can understand the occasional mistake but you have way to many.
krynn chapter 9 . 11/11/2010
um harry father james was a stag. sirius was a dog. so how did black have a stag pendant if you said it was destroyed in another chapter...?
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