Reviews for The Stench of Iron
Tainted Light chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
Aw~ But I never actually got to the LethexStefan conversations. Is he actually a laguz? O_o
liv scully chapter 3 . 4/13/2009
This was very well written-just found it today because I started my second run-through of RD after finally successfully transfering PoR data to my files. Anyways, I have always loved Stefan and Lethe and although I never thought of them as a couple, your story certainly made that a realistic possibility that the game designers shouldn't have ignored.

Keep up the excellent written and characterization.

BTW if inspiration does strike you: my favorite character has always been Nephenee-but it seems like she doesn't get any type of realistic character pairings-only OOC ones like being blackmailed into a relationship/or a relationship with Heather (whom I don't think she would necessarily date)

I am open to pairing her to any decent/age appropriate male character-no Rolf, etc. I guess I would leave the pairing up to you, unless I get inspired to...
HellfireSupremacy chapter 3 . 4/8/2009
Having read this, I now give my full support to the Lethe/Stefan pairing. It absolutely works, its not just some ridiculous "crack pairing."
Percussion Obsessed chapter 3 . 4/8/2009
*cough* AHEM.

uh I'm not some pervy chicka, so I didn't exactly mean smuty smut smut... (embarassed...) I just meant... uh...

Yeah, now I'm getting the S and SS no-no deal... yeah...


Anyways, about the chappy.

You... deserve... (dramatic pause)



So cute! I'd imagine that Lethe would purr when she gets happy. lol. The kiss was cute, not too overly descriptive, might I add, but just enough. (I hate things that under-describe things, and I hate things that over-describe things. Happy mediums, no?) And the beorc and forgiving part was adorable!

Good job! And I noticed that the ficcy wasn't 'complete', so maybe me and my fellow fans will get a bonus chappy! Epilogue, maybe? (lol not SS ranked, hopefully. I'm too scared to venture into the M rated fics...) Of course, you don't have to do anyting you don't want to. :)

NinjaSheik chapter 3 . 4/7/2009

Ethereally chapter 3 . 4/7/2009
Ah. This was simply adorable. Love the interaction between the two- Stefan's such a flirt and I never knew it.

Crack pairings? I can't think of any off the top of my head, but I'd like to see Edward/Leonardo friendship? Mm? :]
PPP SSC chapter 3 . 4/7/2009
Congratulations! You have made ME almost support this pairing as well. And good job on making Lethe in character. Most of the Soren/Lethe shippers seem to think that Lethe would like someone after finding out he was Branded, but here it was still obvious she was uncomfortable and making an exception.

Oh, and to your author's note on Chapter 2-it really is true that Ike/Lethe and Soren/Stefan are out of character because while Lethe may like Ike and Stefan may like Soren the likelihood of mutuality is under 10 percent for Ike and essentially zero for Soren.
NinjaSheik chapter 2 . 4/6/2009
Percussion Obsessed chapter 2 . 4/6/2009
Ok. This deserves two 'daws...


For reasons!

1. You updated so fast! *happy dance*

2. It's just so sweet! Best line ever: "Last time I checked, I was not a beorc."

And MAYBE the third chapter will get three 'daws. Maybe.

This is getting really good! But I don't want it to be over after A support. Maybe you could do S and SS! Although Lethe did seem a bit submissive with him holding her hand in this chapter... but that's just a personal opinion.

Great job so far!

Sentury chapter 2 . 4/6/2009
A plus my friend, A plus.
PPP SSC chapter 2 . 4/6/2009
Stefan, you know Soren's never going to forgive you for outing him to Lethe, right?

And if he finds out, Ike's SO totally going to kill you.

Sorry to ruin your romantic moment with Lethe though. I'm interested to see how this turns out.
Cresha162 chapter 2 . 4/6/2009
You portray Stefan very well, and I find that hard to do. Congratulations. Please continue.
Cresha162 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
STEFAN! I'm so happy! We need more Stefan fics! Continue!
PPP SSC chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Yeah! If Lethe ends up with ANY Branded, Stefan is probably the most likely candidate. (NOT SOREN!) Actually, if Stefan and Lethe ended up a couple, then... Stefan would be in a relationship with a purebred and Lethe in one with someone who was part-beorc, and both of their racism would die down.
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
This could be fun! Believe it! Update soon!
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