|Reviews for Yuuki Nao's Last Will|
| il0vesunfl0wers chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
Hahahaha! At some point it got redundant, but I can just see Nao doing just that, hehe.
Yes, I agree about saving author's notes at the end.
| TheSongWriter chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
LOLLMAOROFL! This...Ha...is...Ha...THE MOST HA HILARIOUS FANFIC I've haha EVER READ!
*Burst out laughing again*
OMG IT'S SO FUNNY I COULDN'T STOP
*Dies of laughter*
| Atra Ventus chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Please, please, please refrain from putting author's notes in the middle of the stories. Save them for the beginning or the end.
If you were reading a book and suddenly there were authors notes in the middle of the story you'd be annoyed wouldn't you? It takes away from the reader's experience.
Just some food for thought.
| ShotgunNeko chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
ROFLMAO! THAT WAS HYSTERICAL...IMMA WALK AROUND SAYING..boot to the head ...just for fun..lol... boot to the head ice cream...lmao...and poor mai..for a second i thought she might NOT get a boot to the head
and ROTFLMAO tate's tasmanian devil in his pants..
this was pure hilarity! oh yeah CALGARY made me laugh too...rotflmao...
thank u thank u
| confused-orange579 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
what is that?
This fanfic rendered me speechless.. wow, I've never read a super duper over mega ultra humorous fanfic...
| hanazono chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
LOL! XD LOL! XD haha
for being so funny, i give you author, a boot to the head! XD
haha. it was so funny that shiz and nat always got to get hit on the head. haha. nice one nao. XD
| ALEXISSA2 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
LMAO That was freaking hilarious. so Calgary as in Canada and why? Thanks a lot for the laughs.
| AngelKruger chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Oh man, this is amazing!
My neighboors must think that i'm crazy now, cause i was outside reading and suddenly i just burst out laughing, the best part is 'And one for Shizuru and the wimp' XD
Great piece of work, so funny, just what i needed, keep up the great work, oh amazing one *bows down*
| Urban Cowboy chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
When I read the title, I thought that this would be a story about Noa trying to reconcile with old enimies, to seek amends for a life lived with naught but anger and resentment.
And boy was I wrong . . .
Good fic! I chuckled, I laughed, I choked on some gummy bears while I was laughing- but that's a whole different story.
| Blackfang64 chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Ha ha ha ha lol! Boot to the head for everyone. Thats definately a funny will, hilarious story. good job
| paeya01 chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
this is one of the funniest fan fictions that i have ever read keep it up. XD
| CobaltArms chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
'“And another for Shizuru and the wimp,” Two boots flew through the air.
That was beyond epic. Best laugh I've had in a while. I think you hit Nao's personality on the dot. Good work! :D
| Stavri chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
great story. it was very good. damm, i laughed like crazy. a boot to the head was what nao let to all her family. damm, that was so good. it reminds of a movie i have seen but it wasn't so funny as this one. nice work my friend. man, i haven't laugh like that for a long time.
| Ume sama chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
What parody is this from? lol
| Meilia chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
HAHHAHAHHA! Boot to the head with Mai HiME Characters!
Too funny... haha... x')