Reviews for Chocolate brown eyes
KayKarenJasmin chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
die you Reid! go Cedric! update Soon! lol


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RedRose102 chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
j0ey91 chapter 3 . 1/22/2010
i really like where this is going :D hope u write more soon :D
RedRose102 chapter 3 . 12/6/2009
Update Soon!
I-stabbed-him-with-the-pencil chapter 3 . 12/5/2009
This looks really good. Oh, and will Cedric die? I usually don't like those kind of stories were he dose. It's just to sad. Update!
wekfnwekonf chapter 3 . 12/5/2009
cool :) update soon poor cedric

wekfnwekonf chapter 2 . 10/17/2009
oh wow i love this so far please update soon :)

i dont normally read uncompleted stories but im going to stick with this

poor cedric :(

:) :) :)
Emilie Voorhees chapter 2 . 8/18/2009
XD I love this plot you've got going on here. I must say, it is very original! I haven't seen another like it!

I think so far that you've kept Cedric in character, Hermione as well! You've got me practically jumping up and down waiting for another fantastic chapter.

I also have an idea for the story...that is...if you are willing to hear it.

I think for the next chapter, you should write a detailed Date between Hermione and Cedric's friend, while Cedric watches from afar. Cedric is concerned about her well being subconsciously and tells himself he's afraid Reid might try and take it to far or something else.

you can take it from there and modify it anyway you want. i really hope i eased some writer's block off your shoulders!

Love, Emilie Voorhees
what do we do now chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
Oh my god! I love this story and this sort of storyline. Please write more!
Eunomia chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Oh my god, what is going to happen next? More please. Nice story
clochlochloe chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
It sounds very promising. Roll on the next chapter!