Reviews for Sweet Caroline
aFellowNerd chapter 36 . 5/31
Hi there,

I have been enjoying your story so far, but in my opinion you took the thing with Blaise and Caroline too far. Draco was right and should have pushed for Caroline to stay in her room, plus they should have punished her. She needs to know boundaries and she crossed a big one with drinking that potion. Also little Blaise might have been cute, because he had all his sassiness as a grownup wrapped up in a smaller package. Grownup Caroline however is not cute at all, you cannot create fluff with an adult and a four year old girl trapped in the body of a full grown woman. Also it is just depressing that all men seem to look for in a woman, is a big bosomed blond with the mind set and speech of a four year old.

Greetings a Fellow Nerd
P.S.: My apologies if my review had spelling errors, English is not my native language.
dyamondstandard chapter 1 . 5/15
I love this story and oh my God, Caroline is a savage...
Dying right now from laughter
bookworm4life0812 chapter 3 . 4/6
Baby brothel and miniature hooker! Awesome laughing so hard right now
Lost in a magic realm chapter 43 . 3/28
Loved, loved, loved reading this story. I'm of to read the sequel, which I hope you'll complete some day soon.
Thank you for sharing the story with us. The de-aging and aging part with Blaise and Caroline were funny. :)
marthapreston4 chapter 3 . 3/23
rereading this I am kinda of disturbed by the causal attitude to some being raped in this story the characters act like its no big deal which I feel is insulting to real life victims and the horrible things they go through
IAmDaisy98 chapter 23 . 12/23/2014
I really love Caroline.
Kinda reminds me of young me! Hahaha
Because when i was around six i remember saying to my cousin's husband that we'll get married when i grow up
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 42 . 11/21/2014
Lovely ending for Dramione.

Poor Caroline when she learned that Blaise was leaving.

Nicely done.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 41 . 11/20/2014
The appearance of Hermione's father was a touching addition for Dramione's wedding.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 30 . 11/20/2014
I really liked Draco's apology/confession to Hermione. Despite being and, her initial response was a little rude.

Oh no fir Blaise's vial mix up.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 8 . 11/19/2014
I think Lucius imperio-ed and obliviated Draco after forcing him to have sex with Hermione. Which would mean that Caroline is Draco's daughter.

Caroline still cracks me up.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 2 . 11/19/2014
LOL! Caroline is hilarious without even trying!
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
Oh my! I wasn't expecting a twist like that! Wow!

Caroline is adorable.
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
How can a ferret like Draco be disgustingly handsome?
Vampy.rEVOLution666 chapter 4 . 8/14/2014
LOL The Borrowers...very funny. Little Tommy Feltz was adorable in the movie was one of my favourite films to watch as a kid :) x this is a great fic and I can't wait to read the rest x x x
Serendipithy chapter 7 . 7/19/2014
Yeah this kind of establishes my opinion that you'd do well doing a humor/romance story. I don't think drama suits your writing style. Don't get me wrong, I think your humor/romance is just fabulous. I had many good laughs in this chapter, but I feel that you didn't really emphasize the emotions over the accident, nor did you really convey Hermione's thoughts over the rape incident. Glossing over those events can work, but I feel like these events are too big to ignore. So at this point, I'd think if you wanted to practice a drama/angst/etc. story, it'd be easier to do one without humor, as your humor seems to consume all other genres.
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