Reviews for metal heart
Kahli Hime chapter 2 . 5/17
This was cute and it was like I was watching himym all over again.
Loved it. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/24
Awesome!
Targaryen Bitch chapter 2 . 11/22/2016
This was legen-wait for it. Why didn't you write HIMYM's plot? I've always thought that if Lily hadn't butt in in swarkles' business, they wouldn't even have broken up the first time. They just needed their time to figure out on their own, that they belong together. What Lily did was rush them into things they didn't even know they wanted then, obviously they freaked out, they needed to take things slow, I really like the approach you took in this fic, personally i would have liked better if things have panned out this way. I don't think that marriage is ooc for them, they wanted to spend the rest of their lives together, because they both know that they are a perfect fit, and there's no way in hell they'd find someone as messed up as them, so marriage wasn't what screw things up in the end in the series, it was the bad writing and the writers forcefully wanting to stick with the end they thought at the beginning, without taking a moment to realize that it just didn't make sense anymore, Robin never loved Ted the way he thought he loved her, and I really don't think he was ever in love with Robin, he was just in love with the idea of her, he loved a person that just didn't exist, and since Robin never really was in love with Ted, that's why she didn't even considered marrying him in the first place, but with Barney was just different, Robin always said she was anti-marriage, but that was until she found the right person for her, I think that the only person that would have convinced Robin into marrying him was Barney, and they did get married, and in my head they are still married being awesome together. Thank you so much for your fic, I really hope you write another one again really soon please...dary.
kidcrooner chapter 2 . 3/19/2016
THIS WAS SO TOTALLY AWESOME. IT'S 4:47AM WHERE I AM BUT I WANTED TO FINISH THIS SO BAD WOOOO!

(Sorry for the capslock, but seriously, this was great and perfect and i love it so much. Theyre so in-character, and it's so hard to get robin and barney so in-character, especially when trying to balance their individual personalities and their personalities together. I really do love this, tha nk you, thank you so much for writing it)
Moonflower26 chapter 2 . 3/13/2016
Wow, awesome story! Exactly what I wanted to read about this couple!
liseg chapter 2 . 4/3/2015
best. story. ever.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/5/2015
Oh my gods that was one of the best fanfics I've ever read.
Booklover9477 chapter 2 . 6/22/2014
I love it! This is one amazing piece of Barney/Robin fanfiction ;D. I especially liked the dynamics between the characters and how very realistic the whole thing is. Keep up the brilliant work! Until next time, Laila :k
Rokimbo chapter 2 . 5/25/2014
All I'm going to say is this is how the show should have ended! A wonderful read - I enjoyed
every line, every paragraph - nicely done!
Dudly chapter 2 . 4/19/2014
You beautiful son of a bitch, this was perfect. Thanks!
HeroineAddict chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
Wow, that was really really amazing. You captured the essence of the characters perfectly and your little hint at the Mother was very well done. I especially liked how you were able to show Robin and Barney developing real feelings for each other without adding any OOC mushy romance. This was very well written and a joy to read.
KitKat359 chapter 2 . 1/19/2014
OMG. Thank you so much for writing this - it is now in my official "Top Ten Best FanFics" list :)

Seriously. You keep Robin and Barney more IC than the actual show. Amazing writing.
sasslady chapter 2 . 12/2/2013
Wow, really awesome story , for lack of better word. This has captured Barney and Robin persnality so well and it was funny , mature, sweet and sexy. I really loved it-
Lily-Magnolia chapter 2 . 10/20/2013
Roflol, I did not know whether to laugh or cry in happiness, or both at the same time because the way you stick true to their characters was just too legen-wait for it-dary!
bantam-shine chapter 2 . 10/2/2013
This story was amazing! You kept Robin & Barney completely in character and allowed for a realistic evolution of their relationship. (Much more so than the actual show. Lol.) Bravo!
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