Reviews for Deceit
XtremeMNCowgirl chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
WOW! This was an EXCELLENT first chapter! And I just seen that you posted chapter two, so I'll go and read/rvw that one. Very great chapter!

LOVE your writing. You have a knack for detailing fabulous imagery through your words!
Livin on the EDGE chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
That is something, Get with both of the Orton Brothers.

Mandy
RollinsInTheDean chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Great story, I love it so far