|Reviews for Take My Breath Away|
| DeansBabyBird chapter 2 . 4/11/2009
yes I do read quickly and no I did not skip the Sammy bits just to get faster to scrummy hurt Dean!
Loved the toilet dolly monstrosity...work of genius but am worried about the replacement costs of the smashed washing basket!
How are ya for cider and do you fancy cheese and crackers now?
| drkstormynite chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Good story so far, can't wait to see what's next.
Thanks for sharing.
| Vampyvii chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Hm- I've read your story before - you must have posted it on UnGen? - Loved it, by the way- definitely worth a 2nd read through!
| Rosssse chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Both boys characterized superbly - keep it up!
| apieceofcake chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
I think the no windows might come into play here.
Good start looking forward to more :-)
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Hey ho commadore!
See this is what I wrote when you first put this beauty up on UnGen.
"See told ya you needed to stop sailing the oceans looking for pirates and bloody well write!
Who'd have known when we met ya that day in your posh frock that you had sucha talent for inflicting delicious violence on our beautiful boy?"
Loved it then love it now...leave off with with the bleedin pirates in SNAA though!