|Reviews for Phoenix Feathers|
| hinzetanner chapter 81 . 1/25
Finish the story
| hinzetanner chapter 74 . 1/25
The pacing has been getting better as the story has progressed and those little quotes at the beginning of each chapter are really good
| hinzetanner chapter 33 . 1/24
I give this story a 5/10 the pacing is inconsistent and it would really help if you added sub-headings to tell who's view point we are reading
| Lair chapter 3 . 10/31/2016
| eclipseddarksoul chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
It's been such a long time since I read this
Hope it's as good as I remember it
| eclipseddarksoul chapter 81 . 1/19/2016
I've binge read this in three days my only complaint is that after the cult thing you developed too many sub-plots also question are the people in myster dungeon reborns if someone could answered that it would be much apresiated
| eclipseddarksoul chapter 16 . 1/17/2016
that joke was awesome also this is a very well thought out story
PS. its so good I'm binge reading it
| SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 81 . 4/29/2012
Took me 2 days to read it but I'm done and all i can say is, are u going to come back to this? Hope you continue writing because they are great works of art. One advice i can give though is whenever you switch to another person's point of view, if you don't want to confuse your audience, can u say whose point of view it is? Other then that I have no complaints.
| NanoCarp chapter 5 . 12/8/2011
I do believe that the phrase we are looking for in this situation is "Sh*t just hit the fan." :)
| Bits chapter 81 . 9/25/2011
Dammit, I'm outta chapters to read... Which took me like a week since I just found out about this story recently (like a week ago?) I don't usually review often but I was like god dammit this story deserves it, you know? Now I'm mega stoked for more. Holy sweet Jesus this story Is genius, just gonna lay that on the table, also maybe you should make the point of view more clear... Sometimes I'm like "what the hell?" cause Tyrone is being held up against something by Karen and biting her leg at the same time or something weird like that... But anyway... 'til next chapter or whatever.
| alkizor chapter 81 . 9/8/2011
first off great story but i was wondering if you could put whose p.o.v. it is in each time you change perpective because it is very confusing when reading the story
| Silvermist464 chapter 25 . 8/8/2011
Alright, I've got to say I'm confused. If it's possible, and not too hard to do, could you tell me who all the characters are, I'm having problems knowing who's who...
| Nalaiscool chapter 40 . 7/28/2011
As long as it continues to be archived... ALNM WILL NEVER DIE.
I continue to read it, it's that good.
Even if i have to buy the rights and put it in print...
I will keep it alive, even if nobody else will.
A little night music FTW. NO EXCEPTIONS.
| Nalaiscool chapter 34 . 7/28/2011
"(That's good. I was afraid that Adian had put you in a comma.)"
A comma? o_0
This is a Comma... -,-
You are thinking of a COMA. Just one M.
Also, We are outta Tp, and Liquid Plumber.
...And the circuit breaker just got tripped...
| Nalaiscool chapter 33 . 7/28/2011
Ryudo-kin: *Imagines Nanashi Chimera in a jester suit...*
but it'd be a nice jester, Like saying "hi" to random people on the street.
"Do you take me for a FOOL?"
...Yes, Yes I do.
Gesture is the word you are looking for. A Jester is also known as a Fool, or a Joker.