|Reviews for Reloaded|
| yellow 14 chapter 8 . 11/7/2014
You know Ellie, you have a wonderful (or terrible, depending on how you see it) sense of timing when it comes to posting new chapters. This popped into my inbox, JUST as I had to shut the computer down. (I had to pick up my nephew from school!) Alas I had to delay reading this brilliant chapter. Really smooth Elyon, you really need to work on the whole subtlety thing. It's good to see that Caleb has managed to FINALLY realise that Elyon is Sailor Meridian and notice that she is indeed a pretty girl, especially with the insane amount of chemistry going on between them.
Sadly I didn't recognise the song. The only game song that comes to mind of late is Ghost Assassin, which is a Starcraft song. (And I don't PLAY Starcraft!)
I love Alchemy dragging Caleb about, very funny. I'll have to write them another pairing piece. I just couldn't stop laughing. Also, I love how Alchemy is feeling left out, it feels very real, very emotional.
Cedric really should have been a bit kinder when he broke her heart though I think. (Unless he really was oblivious, but Caleb makes me think otherwise.)
And now Alchemy is in the know as well. Well this should be...interesting. Sailor V was a bit on the harsh side, but I think she has good reason to be. Keep updating
| DayDreamer9 chapter 8 . 11/6/2014
So then, Orube/Rebecca has shown up and was that Millennium line a not-so-subtle hint? I think so :3 And now Alchemy may just be in the know!
Badass chapter as always, being loyal to the source material and original in its own right at the same time. Only you could pull it off, Ells _- Hope you and lil' Evie have a nice evening! "waves"
| DayDreamer9 chapter 7 . 8/15/2014
Corn-erm, Sailor V arrives on the scene! Can't wait to see Part 2
| yellow 14 chapter 7 . 8/15/2014
Elyon with a crush and Elyon geeking out. I love seeing them both. And we finally meet Sailor V/Cornelia in this fic. I must admit, the cold attitude suits her. I also like how you're writing the strain on Elyon's friendship with Alchemy. I can imagine how that would be difficult to say the least. And of course her worries are so very real. Keep updating
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/15/2014
I can't believe how this is just part 1. It was amazing, like always. And, like always, I will cut it up and go over it bit for bit, explaining to you why I thought it to be amazing. (Next to your way of writing, of course)
So we start with Sailor V, of which we all pretty much know to be Cornelia, and Napoleon watching Sailor Meridian. First of all, I like the touch of changing Artemis to Napoleon. I can't fully remember if he appeared beforehand, if so excuse me for my tardiness. But other than that, I loved to see how much Cornelia Sailor V was, while holding bits and pieces of Minako, just like you'd done with the other girls (Taranee being Taranee along with Rei and Ami, Will being Will along with Makato and Elyon being Elyon along with Usagi). I could see the Cornelia Hale I love (and sometimes despise for being stuck-up) watching Elyon. I could see them doing that while sitting in the cafeteria in any other WITCH fic.
Her general dislike towards Tuxedo Kamen is a little ooc, but that's most likely due to the mash-up of Sailor Moon and W.I.T.C.H. And I must say, I like it. I don't think I would have liked it to see a collected Sailor V gush over Tuxedo Kamen. Cornelia is, just like Minako, suspicious of him.
Then the part from Elyon's POV. You finally pointed something out I'd always thought to be missing in Sailor Moon. For Usagi always seems rather useless, except for her tiara. We of course know it isn't so, but in the beginning you get that vibe. I like it how you had Elyon tackle it, how she felt it and how she's trying to better herself. What I liked as well is how she reacted to Sailor V's appearance and then when Sailor V told her to stay away from our masked friend. Elyon is a lot more protective over Tuxedo Kamen and less pouty than Usagi, which once again, seems very Elyon like. Thus, when even her idol tries to stop her, her explosion towards her is very natural.
And, this is apart of Elyon in general and more concerning Cornelia, I like how you didn't have her proclaim she's the Princess like Sailor V did in the anime and manga. Because here it's clear that not even Sailor V has all her memories. (Aside from the fact that the real Sailor V only remembered about who the real princess was at the moment Usagi became Serenity again.)
But back to the rest. As I said about exploding, I also liked how Elyon also exploded towards Will and the rest when Tuxedo Kamen's loyalty was questioned. It must be an amusing sight to see, how a petite girl can get a larger, more athletic girl to cower. What also bring me to Will and Taranee in general and how to act. both have walls build up and even though they are slowly opening up, they still don't show it a lot. They still have problems when Elyon is hugging them, as to how they should react. Taranee observing and Will trying to console them with food. It's at least a beginning and will help on building their bond.
What also struck me as interesting, was how Taranee had noticed the difference between Will and Elyon, or should I say, the bond she has with them. How she's noticing how Elyon seems to be on a different level. It's like you are leaving small bread crumbs of the truth throughout the chapters, slowly helping those who've never seen Sailor Moon to help them figure out who the Princess is for real.
And finally, something I truly loved. Was how Elyon thought of Caleb being Tuxedo Kamen and disregarding it, with Will backing her up with logic. While we all know who Tuxedo Kamen is. I laughed and loved the reminder of how Usagi too denies Mamuro from being Tuxedo Kamen.
All in all, a great chapter!
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/30/2014
Of course monsters are attacking there; ITS FUCKING FLORIDA! Why wouldn't they chose the state with pure naked crazy.
By the way good story.
| Avatar Aang chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeee eeeeeeee continue xxxxxxxxxxxx
| PrincessOfFrenchToast chapter 6 . 11/9/2012
This is an awesome story :) I never would've thought to make Elyon the leader, but all things considered, it makes perfect sense to me now!
I've been trying to figure out who Zoi is... And how would Irma and Hay Lin be able to fit into the story...? Please update soon, I can't wait for them to meet Sailor V ;)
| Evilness321 chapter 2 . 9/7/2011
What's this? Two reviews for you in one night? Yes, neechan, it is not an illusion of the Dark Kingdom! I'm actually behaving here... Anywho.
It is funny that I start off reading this listening to my Sailor Moon Music and Song box tunes, then finished listening to the triumphant music from Pirates of the Caribbean. It went so well, and made my reading go by so fast tonight! I really enjoyed this first Act, Csila is so adorable and the slight touch of snarky-ness makes me wanna giggle in a good way. I loved the line "Alchemy gushed with tittering pride for her father" from the earlier parts. And how she kept digging herself in to a hole before realizing what she was saying. Is she the type to speak before she thinks? At least around Martin? xD
I also loved her first henshin. I could hear the Sailor Moon Classic music from the English Dub episode playing while reading! It all flowed so smoothly! Great job so far, again! For now, I'm seeing if I can't make it a goal to get through one or two chapters a day until I'm caught up. It's been so long, like I said before, that I just decided "Screw it, I'm gonna read it all over again so I know what the hell I'm reading about again!"
So now I will also say that I'm learning a few new tricks with writing while reading your style. You might see a hint of that in my next update.
Hope I'm beginning to make up for my lack in leaving reviews lately... ;
Now I must trot off to write in my own stories a bit to the tunes of PotC before I hit the hay.
| Evilness321 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Ok, I decided to reread the story all together since it's been so long since I last read anything about it, and I still love this opening! Especially the parts where Elyon is dreaming about trying to decide who she wants to emulate or be more like, her cousin, Sailor V, or her all time favorite idol, Cornelia. It's such a cute beginning to the series, and I'm glad you decided to pick it up again writing wise. I'm rereading it all and going to leave reviews for you at the end of each chapter/act/whatever you wanna call them as I go on this time since I dropped the ball on dA about doing that. *feels like a bad sibling as a result*
For being a parody, this is a super fun and enjoyable read!
| scottgrubb chapter 6 . 9/4/2011
And, Jupiter finally officially joins the gang. Now all that's left is Venus and the revelation of the Princess.
And, apologies for randomly browsing your Deviantart page without commenting. I know it was wrong, and I'll try to have better decorum.
| yellow 14 chapter 6 . 9/4/2011
Call it a bit of artistic license;D I really loved watching that little chat between Taranee and Will, really well done. And even though its not your general style, are we seeing serious chemistry between Caleb and Elyon/SailorMeridian? Very smart Taranee finding Will like that, but poor kid having to go through all of that s*** at thirteen. No wonder she's screwed up. Brilliant chapter Sokai, keep updating.
| Aria Morid chapter 6 . 9/4/2011
Again an awesome and LONG chapter. P
Loved it totally. The Caleb and Elyon part was truly funny and a bit cute (though I'm not a real CxM fan myself) and the conversation between Taranee and Will was touching. To be honest, I thought you were showing that Will and Taranee would become closer friends...Seeing that the two of them are best friends in the comics...Then again, Sailor Jupiter and Sailor Venus are best friends in the Sailor Senshi canon, just like Sailor Mars and Sailor Moon... Sailor Mercury being everyone's friend...
About Sailor Mercury...are you going to place her in this? I mean, I can see Irma and Hay Lin act as Sailor Neptune and Uranus, so having a Sailor Mercury would be a bit troublesome since you don't exactly have the right person for it. Oh well, I guess I'll see.
BTW. I'm sorry for your loss. I know how painful it is to see a loved pet die.
| DayDreamer9 chapter 6 . 9/3/2011
This is so perfect. I really just wanna say that. I still think your fics are well-written, even if I've been flaking lately with reading.
And I'm sorry about LeeLee, I know how you feel; I lost Lucky a month ago and it still stings that he's gone. Best wishes to you, though. LeeLee's still with you, in Csilla and in memory.
| Aria Morid chapter 5 . 7/8/2011
This is FANTASTIC! Please keep continuing! This story is brilliant! The mix between W.I.T.C.H. and Sailor Moon is perfect! Please continue, I beg of you!