|Reviews for Reloaded|
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/30
Of course monsters are attacking there; ITS FUCKING FLORIDA! Why wouldn't they chose the state with pure naked crazy.
By the way good story.
| Avatar Aang chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeee eeeeeeee continue xxxxxxxxxxxx
| PrincessOfFrenchToast chapter 6 . 11/9/2012
This is an awesome story :) I never would've thought to make Elyon the leader, but all things considered, it makes perfect sense to me now!
I've been trying to figure out who Zoi is... And how would Irma and Hay Lin be able to fit into the story...? Please update soon, I can't wait for them to meet Sailor V ;)
| Evilness321 chapter 2 . 9/7/2011
What's this? Two reviews for you in one night? Yes, neechan, it is not an illusion of the Dark Kingdom! I'm actually behaving here... Anywho.
It is funny that I start off reading this listening to my Sailor Moon Music and Song box tunes, then finished listening to the triumphant music from Pirates of the Caribbean. It went so well, and made my reading go by so fast tonight! I really enjoyed this first Act, Csila is so adorable and the slight touch of snarky-ness makes me wanna giggle in a good way. I loved the line "Alchemy gushed with tittering pride for her father" from the earlier parts. And how she kept digging herself in to a hole before realizing what she was saying. Is she the type to speak before she thinks? At least around Martin? xD
I also loved her first henshin. I could hear the Sailor Moon Classic music from the English Dub episode playing while reading! It all flowed so smoothly! Great job so far, again! For now, I'm seeing if I can't make it a goal to get through one or two chapters a day until I'm caught up. It's been so long, like I said before, that I just decided "Screw it, I'm gonna read it all over again so I know what the hell I'm reading about again!"
So now I will also say that I'm learning a few new tricks with writing while reading your style. You might see a hint of that in my next update.
Hope I'm beginning to make up for my lack in leaving reviews lately... ;
Now I must trot off to write in my own stories a bit to the tunes of PotC before I hit the hay.
| Evilness321 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Ok, I decided to reread the story all together since it's been so long since I last read anything about it, and I still love this opening! Especially the parts where Elyon is dreaming about trying to decide who she wants to emulate or be more like, her cousin, Sailor V, or her all time favorite idol, Cornelia. It's such a cute beginning to the series, and I'm glad you decided to pick it up again writing wise. I'm rereading it all and going to leave reviews for you at the end of each chapter/act/whatever you wanna call them as I go on this time since I dropped the ball on dA about doing that. *feels like a bad sibling as a result*
For being a parody, this is a super fun and enjoyable read!
| scottgrubb chapter 6 . 9/4/2011
And, Jupiter finally officially joins the gang. Now all that's left is Venus and the revelation of the Princess.
And, apologies for randomly browsing your Deviantart page without commenting. I know it was wrong, and I'll try to have better decorum.
| yellow 14 chapter 6 . 9/4/2011
Call it a bit of artistic license;D I really loved watching that little chat between Taranee and Will, really well done. And even though its not your general style, are we seeing serious chemistry between Caleb and Elyon/SailorMeridian? Very smart Taranee finding Will like that, but poor kid having to go through all of that s*** at thirteen. No wonder she's screwed up. Brilliant chapter Sokai, keep updating.
| TTigerz chapter 6 . 9/4/2011
Again an awesome and LONG chapter. P
Loved it totally. The Caleb and Elyon part was truly funny and a bit cute (though I'm not a real CxM fan myself) and the conversation between Taranee and Will was touching. To be honest, I thought you were showing that Will and Taranee would become closer friends...Seeing that the two of them are best friends in the comics...Then again, Sailor Jupiter and Sailor Venus are best friends in the Sailor Senshi canon, just like Sailor Mars and Sailor Moon... Sailor Mercury being everyone's friend...
About Sailor Mercury...are you going to place her in this? I mean, I can see Irma and Hay Lin act as Sailor Neptune and Uranus, so having a Sailor Mercury would be a bit troublesome since you don't exactly have the right person for it. Oh well, I guess I'll see.
BTW. I'm sorry for your loss. I know how painful it is to see a loved pet die.
| DayDreamer9 chapter 6 . 9/3/2011
This is so perfect. I really just wanna say that. I still think your fics are well-written, even if I've been flaking lately with reading.
And I'm sorry about LeeLee, I know how you feel; I lost Lucky a month ago and it still stings that he's gone. Best wishes to you, though. LeeLee's still with you, in Csilla and in memory.
| TTigerz chapter 5 . 7/8/2011
This is FANTASTIC! Please keep continuing! This story is brilliant! The mix between W.I.T.C.H. and Sailor Moon is perfect! Please continue, I beg of you!
| Sniper Fodder chapter 5 . 12/17/2010
Lol wow. So sorry it took like a week or two to review this one. It honestly was so long that I was only part way through it when my shoft ended. Lol it was so long I took notes!
Lol where to start? Oh yes! Before each chapter, depending on how long it was since the last time I read a fic, I'll check the reviews briefly before I start to make sure I know what chapters I've read. Well anyways I noticed one of the reviews was so... angry lol. All I'm going to say aboout that is haters gonna hate.
Onwards! Lol so I like how you are re-using Marsily. I guess it helps you already have a lot of background info already for it cause of TRG. I also loved how you exposed the guardians in the media. Elyon's reaction? Priceless haha. Though I did think you shined a relatively... positive light on the media. Most media outlets are so... grim and untrustworthy IMO. Though that's life and this is Reloaded. :P It also cracked me up how the guardian's alter egos were being discussed right in front of them. Talk about a superman like situation :P
So florida eh? I got nothing against it besides the fact it is probably uber humid! And oranges. Lots and lots of oranges. But honestly it's probably a good enough location as any. Though I'm curious, are there trees that turn color in florida? All I can think of when I think of florida is palm trees. Stupid CSI: Miami...
Also I just noticed this. Is it me or does miss Gnone or w/e her name is like red haired people? I've just realized how much red I'm seeing.
As for will's transformation into sailor jupiter, superb job. The details and sescription just clicked into my head. The tree frog earrings were also a splendid touch. As for all that Will has gone through... damn. Next story you write... show a little mercy to our beloved red haired heroine? Lol. I mean... poor I shouldn't really say anything, seeing as how I've prolly just been as mean to her in my fic. Lol actually everyone seems to really take out on will in their stories. I wonder why? *stops musing about Will's fate in fanfiction*
So, another great chapter yet again. Great _long_ chapter that is. Lol both actually. And for grins and giggles... I didn't find any grammar/spelling errors. Such a long chapter too! Either you are getting so adept at double checking your writing, or your words are so mesmerizing we don't notice! Well, untill the next chapter, I shall await the end of this epic saga. *ques zelda theme music*
| Nightgazer333 chapter 2 . 8/7/2010
Sailormmon should be Sailor Moon.
And Sailormeridian should be Sailor Meridian instead.
And you mispelled earth since it should be Earth. Capital. Planet.
| Guess Who chapter 5 . 5/12/2010
stupendous,wicked,awesome it is the best thing that i ever read,well not actually but it is still fricken awesome!
| Lucky OCB chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
Hey, didn't you post this on Deviantart?
- Olivia ( Lucky OCB)
| XV-Dragon chapter 5 . 4/29/2010
Wow...was not expacting Will's life to be like that.
I admit as a fan of the mother-daughter realtionship between Will and her mom, I'm hoping there is a patch up later down the line for those, but i'll just have to wait and see of that happens.
As for the chapter in genrla, it was awsome as always Sokai! I would have reivewed soon, butl iek you said at the start of this chapter, its very long so it tokok me a few days to read it all (could not do it in one sitting due to work and stuff)
Can't wait to see what happens next!