Reviews for Darkened Paths Excerpts
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
well done and poor Luna
red neo ranger chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
ahh so sad
tick-toc-tick chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Wow. I really do love your "Darkened Paths" story but and get why/where this comes from but still wow. Poor Luna.
Bobboky chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
good work
Wonderbee31 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
This was a great part here, and have to say that I could see why Luna would be so affected like she was, as that's one of the nightmares kids have at times, that something will happen to Mama. Very well done on covering something JKR basically glossed over, heck even Disney covers it better than she did.
katdemon1895 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
poor luna, i remember you mentioning your version of mrs. lovegood's death but seeing it written out like this just makes me sad

nicely written though, i like the nargles and the fort and i think you did an excellent job characterizing mini luna
Aealket chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Hi There:

*Sob* *Sob*

You just had to make it Luna's fault didn't you.

Alan