Reviews for A Forgotten Friendship
darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
keep up the good work on your stories
Vitzy chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Hey! Excellent beginning. Now reading the next few chapters...even though I really should be revising! Ah well your story is quite intriguing.

Paola-Bearrr chapter 16 . 10/29/2009
I've been waiting for this chapter for a longg time.

The next chapter would be nice, please?

Nez93 chapter 16 . 10/29/2009
YAY A CHAPTER! XD! lmao the boys got caught! well at least there wont be the whole irritating mix up about their feelings! haha ooh the girls have to get them back good, but i cant think of anything. hmm it has to be embarassing, and probably very public! ah i loved this chapter, as always! seriously... can you do no wrong! and the "you're hair is actually really nice when you comb it" thing is EXACTLY what i said to you lol! ah i love it and i cant wait for the next chapter!
Jaymy M chapter 16 . 10/28/2009
ah, saved by esme... until later when the girls give it to 'em for their little prank
Jaymy M chapter 15 . 8/12/2009
rosalie, sweet? yeah, only emmett would wax poetic about his rosie. thank goodness forjazz and the pizza.

Ew emmett? Ew is such a girly word. Ah, man, dude, yo, but not ew!

not too stalkerish if ou consider edward read everyon's mind, and excpt for dog alice knew what secret things were going on with everyone, besides, guys/gals totall crash slumper girls/guys night.

my question is: dont an of these kids have responsible parents who wonder where they?

update soon, yes?
Jaymy M chapter 14 . 8/12/2009
ch 14 jasper’s agony

glad someone was finally able to write one with parent drowning drink by drink, who was out of control, but with a better ending that a bloody and broken kid or dead other parent. Kudos to you for not going there.
Jaymy M chapter 13 . 8/12/2009
a murder mystery. intriguing twist. not sure what all the laws were back then. but where I live now, that’d probably be enough to file charges on the brother or sister and put ‘em in jail or at least put the Masens in protective custody til after trial, with guards at court. If the sibling persisted but wasn’t cot, they’d likely go into WitSec program (Witness Securit) and get new IDs, residences, new lives.

was that supposed to be the Swans the closest family or closet family? Closet would inferred there was an affair and perhaps closer ties between the two families, esp. ed and bella
Jaymy M chapter 12 . 8/12/2009
yep, knew she'd forgive him. he still hasn't given the skinny on his parents dying or whatever. think maybe... volturi or james were out to get 'em. or maybe edward sr's job was a bit more flagrant than liza masen.

reading on...
Jaymy M chapter 11 . 8/12/2009
poor bella. so perceptive yet often the last to catch on when it comes to her. it was right there on the tip of her tongue to taste, lol. if she's true to form, she'll forgive him. i mean tis not like a 7/8-year-old had any say in where his parents decide they have to live. ...
Jaymy M chapter 10 . 8/12/2009
loved this chap. can't wait for her to figure it out, and to "see" their reactions when he divulges his "secret." poor edward. hope bella is as forgiving of edward in your story as she is SMeyer's books.
Jaymy M chapter 8 . 8/12/2009
OK. so they just met these new guys. how the heck do they know what's " weird" behavior for the guys? that might have just been the way these guys are. maybe they're just moody or messed up. valid point. they're at a new school recently in a new home. who knows what came before. that might just be normal, esp. for kids who had to be adopted or fostered.

End of rant. I know. You're the writer so you know these characters backward and forward and what comes next and before. Point was... the girls didn't. realize its fic, but just was too much of a stretch for me.
Jaymy M chapter 7 . 8/12/2009
boy these are some prying girls, and so wrapped up in guys they've only just met. trust generally comes with time, and with time and trust...information and sharing.

reading on...
Jaymy M chapter 6 . 8/12/2009
ch 6. story is one of the best written so far. Keep up the good work
Jaymy M chapter 5 . 8/12/2009
Interesting how Edward gets two sets of parents and in each one is a doctor. Birth mom, adoptive father.
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