Hey, just to let you know a few Japanese note, though someone else may have told you by now.
Kokosei-tentei is, translated from it's original character from Japanese (こうこうせい), is Koukousei. There's an unnoticable 'u' in there.
Also, Kaito is Kuroba's actual name. Kaitou (かいとう）can be a way to write 'mysterious thief' (Very fitting). Another subtle difference in the words, however.
Anyways, thought I'd give a bit of help with the words if you haven't gotten any. I've taken Japanese and I'm still learning more.

By the way, great story so far! I'm really finding it interesting! Thanks for writing it! It helps when I need a good story!

Eien M.

Dammit mangaluva, you got me addicted to TV Tropes all that time ago when I read this fic!

You're doing great in this fic, I have nothing to complain about.

Hey can you send me another link to the pdf or upload a new one? since megaupload is down...

First can I just say I loved your AN:) That last paragraph was wonderful:)
As for the fic itself- I love it:) I love how you have gone back in time for the first chap in order to set up for your story:) That was a really cool idea and gives us a better idea of what we need to know and where you are taking this story. I cant wait to read what you do next:)
I'm going to look it up but just for cohesion, what is chapter 679 or what volume is that in?
Cant wait to read more!

Out of all the pairings in this fanfic, you made me love Saguru X Akako the most 3

I'm from Germany. It's 5 am right now. This story is adictive

Well fuck

Great story!

OH MY KAMI GRACIOUS QITH EDWARD ELRIC SPRINKLES ON TOP, this was absolutly, possitivly no doubt, extrordinary! It was SOOOO EPIC! Sooo long (though I read it in two days... I didn't sleep Saturday nor sunday/ Monday) but SOOOO *for a lack of a better word* GOOD! DAMN I loved it!

Yeah, I just spent the whole night into the morning hours reading this. Holy moly...just when I thought it was going to end, it didn't end. Just when I thought things could not get any better, they got even more awesome. Just when people were done getting injured that last shootout with Red Rum and the Organization, wow...

And just when things could not end on such a happy note...they ended beautifully. Lovely prose and work and I enjoyed this - truly enjoyed it.

As much as I like Ran, I find a Shinichi and Ai pairing incredibly attractive. GAH! It would be so cute. Too bad I haven't found a decently written/lengthy fic with them yet...

92 chapters?!
You are OFFICIALLY my new favorite person.

THANK YOU SO MUCH! This story was amazing. :")

Great job! Happy Writing!

The final thoughts of the characters truly summed things up :D

You have now gained a crowning status on my list of fav FF authors.

I LOVED that movie, Princess Bride, and I always respect those who are awesome enough to integrate the lines from the movie into their fics. Nice touch, by the way. Kaito would totally replace "prepare to die" with "prepare to get your ** kicked."