Reviews for Rivalry
Amamiya Toki chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Aww, it's so cute!
aihesrjergirsbfesbf chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Hello mayte.

omigosh this was a really funny/cute one-shot (in my opinion)

and i love the fact that your making one-shots of the children and stuff its cute and they are just like there

fathers it makes me lol hehe hope you make more of these!


kattylin chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
what the- i take a 4 day vacation and now this! wah i missed so much! (64 alerts on my mail proves it ahaha)
chillaxin101 chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Hey, looks like dreams do come true! I wanted to read another one-shot and here it is.

It's cute, I can really imagine this. Great Job.

Do you plan on writing a one-shot about shiori's brother?